Koyal
June 26, 2007, 3:55am
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*guruub-e-shaam hii se Khud ko yuuN mahasuus kartaa huuN*
*k jaise ik dee'yaa huuN aur havaa kii zad pe rakhaa huuN*
chamakti dhuup tum apane hii daaman meiN na bhar ley’naa
maiN saari raat paiRooN ki tarah baarish meiN bheegaa huuN
koi TuuTaa huaa rishtaa na daaman se ulajh jaa’ey
tumhaare saath pahli baar bazaarooN meiN niklaa huuN
ye kis aavaaz kaa bosaa mere honThooN pe kaa’Npaa hai
maiN pichli shab sadaa’ooN ki halaavat bhuul baiThaa huuN
bichar ke tum se maiN ne bhi koi saathi nahiN dhunDhaa
hujuum-e-rah_guzar meiN duur tak dekho akelaa huuN
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beautiful :k:
Amal
June 26, 2007, 11:52am
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*bichar ke tum se maiN ne bhi koi saathi nahiN dhunDhaa*
*hujuum-e-rah_guzar meiN duur tak dekho akelaa huuN*
This is perhaps the best of the rest. Great choice Koyal :k: Thanx for sharing it with us
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Very nice Koyal ji:-)
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wah kia khoob intekhaab hai. gehraai hai in ashaar main…
:k:
chamakti dhuup tum apane hii daaman meiN na bhar ley’naa
*maiN saari raat paiRooN ki tarah baarish meiN bheegaa huuN *
Koyal
June 26, 2007, 3:59pm
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yes u are right i like this too and forgot to color : aur isi base pe ki hia puri gazal
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bichar ke tum se maiN ne bhi koi saathi nahiN dhunDhaa
hujuum-e-rah_guzar meiN duur tak dekho akelaa huuN
zabardast!!
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nice:)
Koyal
June 27, 2007, 12:22pm
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thanks
Koyal
June 27, 2007, 12:22pm
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nice:)
thanks :)
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Amal
June 27, 2007, 12:33pm
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yes u are right i like this too and forgot to color : aur isi base pe ki hia puri gazal :)
Lekin aap ka title to kuch aur hi hey. Anyway, great minds think alike and fools seldom differ ;)
Re: chamakti dhuup tum apane hii daaman meiN na bhar ley'naa
guruub-e-shaam hii se Khud ko yuuN mahsuus kartaa huuN
k jaise ik dee'yaa huuN aur havaa kii zad pe rakhaa huuN
Zabardast Koyal ji :~)
Koyal
July 11, 2007, 2:25pm
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Zabardast Koyal ji :~)
thanks :)
Koyal
July 11, 2007, 2:26pm
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Lekin aap ka title to kuch aur hi hey. Anyway, great minds think alike and fools seldom differ ;)
title pe mut jaiey na :p
SJ
July 11, 2007, 3:18pm
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Bohat he zabardust ...........
:)
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1st shair :k:
Koyal
November 8, 2007, 2:15am
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Bohat he zabardust ...........
:)
thanks :)
Koyal
November 8, 2007, 2:16am
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Re: chamakti dhuup tum apane hii daaman meiN na bhar ley’naa
koi TuuTaa huaa rishtaa na daaman se ulajh jaa’ey
tumhaare saath pahli baar bazaarooN meiN niklaa huuN
Re: chamakti dhuup tum apane hii daaman meiN na bhar ley’naa
*bichar ke tum se maiN ne bhi koi saathi nahiN dhunDhaa*
*hujuum-e-rah_guzar meiN duur tak dekho akelaa huuN*
mein ne bhee to koi saathi naheen dhunda