chamakti dhuup tum apane hii daaman meiN na bhar ley'naa

Koyal · June 26, 2007, 3:55am

*guruub-e-shaam hii se Khud ko yuuN mahasuus kartaa huuN* *k jaise ik dee'yaa huuN aur havaa kii zad pe rakhaa huuN*

chamakti dhuup tum apane hii daaman meiN na bhar ley’naa
maiN saari raat paiRooN ki tarah baarish meiN bheegaa huuN

koi TuuTaa huaa rishtaa na daaman se ulajh jaa’ey
tumhaare saath pahli baar bazaarooN meiN niklaa huuN

ye kis aavaaz kaa bosaa mere honThooN pe kaa’Npaa hai
maiN pichli shab sadaa’ooN ki halaavat bhuul baiThaa huuN

bichar ke tum se maiN ne bhi koi saathi nahiN dhunDhaa
hujuum-e-rah_guzar meiN duur tak dekho akelaa huuN

deep_ocean · June 26, 2007, 4:01am

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beautiful :k:

Amal · June 26, 2007, 11:52am

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This is perhaps the best of the rest. Great choice Koyal :k: Thanx for sharing it with us

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 26, 2007, 12:43pm

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Very nice Koyal ji:-)

WiseGuy · June 26, 2007, 1:00pm

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wah kia khoob intekhaab hai. gehraai hai in ashaar main…
:k:
chamakti dhuup tum apane hii daaman meiN na bhar ley’naa
*maiN saari raat paiRooN ki tarah baarish meiN bheegaa huuN *

Koyal · June 26, 2007, 3:59pm

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yes u are right i like this too and forgot to color : aur isi base pe ki hia puri gazal

Jhanjharewali · June 27, 2007, 11:13am

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bichar ke tum se maiN ne bhi koi saathi nahiN dhunDhaa
hujuum-e-rah_guzar meiN duur tak dekho akelaa huuN

zabardast!!

bheegiyaad · June 27, 2007, 11:16am

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nice:)

Koyal · June 27, 2007, 12:22pm

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thanks

Koyal · June 27, 2007, 12:22pm

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thanks :)

Amal · June 27, 2007, 12:33pm

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Lekin aap ka title to kuch aur hi hey. Anyway, great minds think alike and fools seldom differ ;)

Precious_Khan · June 28, 2007, 9:55am

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Zabardast Koyal ji :~)

Koyal · July 11, 2007, 2:25pm

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thanks :)

Koyal · July 11, 2007, 2:26pm

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title pe mut jaiey na :p

SJ · July 11, 2007, 3:18pm

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Bohat he zabardust ...........
:)

Shab-e-Hijar · July 11, 2007, 6:12pm

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1st shair :k:

Koyal · November 8, 2007, 2:15am

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thanks :)

Koyal · November 8, 2007, 2:16am

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bholibisri · November 15, 2007, 2:01am

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koi TuuTaa huaa rishtaa na daaman se ulajh jaa’ey
tumhaare saath pahli baar bazaarooN meiN niklaa huuN

Capricorn · November 15, 2007, 8:58am

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mein ne bhee to koi saathi naheen dhunda