chalo hum maa'N laitey haiN saza k must'hiq tharey hum

Koyal · April 5, 2008, 11:09pm

***dil udaas hai bohat koi paiy'ghaam he likh do tum apna naam na likho gum'naam he likh do

meri qismat maiN gham-e-tanhaa’e hai lakiN
tamaam umer na likho aik shaam he likh do

zarori nahi k mil jaa’ey sakoo’N har kisi ko
sar-e-bazam na aa’oo magar be-naa he likh do

ye jaa’nti hooN k umer bhar tanha muj ko rahna hai
magar pal do pal ghar do ghari meray naam he likh do

chalo hum maa’N laitey haiN saza k must’hiq thehrey hum
koi in’aam na likho ko il’zaam he likh do***

being_lonely · April 6, 2008, 2:06am

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Salamz umda ghazal bridy jee :) but aik 2 spelling mistakes hain woh to correct karein :p

bheegiyaad · April 6, 2008, 1:36pm

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very nice :k:

K337 · April 6, 2008, 1:39pm

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aww:bummer:

nice

SinlneR · April 6, 2008, 2:50pm

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awesome !!!!

Precious_Khan · April 6, 2008, 10:31pm

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Buhat Khoob :~)

Aik Guzarish hay Mohtarma … Poet Ka Naam Bhi Likh Diya karain

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 7, 2008, 9:43pm

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Nice :-)

Shab-e-Hijar · April 7, 2008, 10:07pm

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very nice :k:

Jhanjharewali · April 8, 2008, 12:19am

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Koko…very dilkash! :k:

Koyal · April 10, 2008, 4:17am

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.
thanks jhun jhun

Koyal · April 10, 2008, 4:17am

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likho konsay spelling galat haiN

Thanks btw

Koyal · April 10, 2008, 4:18am

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thanks silnar

Koyal · April 10, 2008, 4:19am

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thanks Gul :)

Aaana · April 10, 2008, 4:55am

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Koyal u always post beatiful posts..
i only clicked on this thread because the starter was you..and wow..nice

Sheal · April 10, 2008, 1:24pm

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zaberdast :k:

moonmine · April 10, 2008, 7:40pm

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chalo hum maa'N laitey haiN saza k must'hiq thehrey hum
koi in'aam na likho ko il'zaam he likh do

wow!!!