~~ Chalo hum maan laitay hain tumhein hum kho chuke lekin ~~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amarbail May 10, 2011, 1:12pm 1

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Chalo hum maan laitay hain

Tumhein hum kho chuke lekin

Tumhari yaad ab tak bhi

Humein betaab rakhti hai

Hamari saans ab tak bhi

Tumhari aas rakhti hai

Magar ab yeh bhi suntay hain

Tumhari raah raushan hai

Tumhein mil jayega koi

Magar afsoos ke hum jaisa

Agar pao kaheen tum tau

Mujhe do harf likh daina

Ke … Manzil mil gae mujh ko …

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GuL-e-Tasbeeh May 10, 2011, 3:05pm 2

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**achi nazm share ki hai Amarbail.. :k:

salamat rahiye..**

Aryaan May 10, 2011, 9:47pm 3

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Very Nice Arif..:k:

pktun May 11, 2011, 12:34am 4

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nyc :k:

NOREEN19 May 11, 2011, 8:32pm 5

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bahot hi khoob

Amal May 11, 2011, 8:43pm 6

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It always impresses me a lot k:

fara May 12, 2011, 12:26am 7

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Buhat piyara khayyal hay...

waleedhbk May 12, 2011, 2:16pm 8

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Awesome :k:

Amarbail May 12, 2011, 8:34pm 9

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Thank you my friends for liking and your appreciation ... :)

muddii May 13, 2011, 6:03am 10

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Nice poem:)

IS May 13, 2011, 6:03am 11

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very nice amar bhai :-)