chalo ab faisla karlo

tahreem_saeed · April 22, 2007, 5:29pm

Chalo Ab Faisla Ker Lo
K Jo Apni Muhabbat The
Nasha Tha Wo Jawani Ka
Khumaar Utra To Ye Jana
Muhabbat Youn Nahe Hoti
Jo Mainay Khuwaab Dekhey They
Ab Un Ki Kirchiyan He Hain
Or Zakhmi Paon Hain Merey
Tumhara Or Merey Dermiyan
KOi Dewaar Hay Shayed
Ye Her Giz Gir Nahe Sakti
Mujhay Tum Ab Bhe Piyaray Ho
Mager Ab Mour Aisa Hey
Jahan Itnay Mukhalif Hain
Tumhain Ye To Pata Hoga
Mukhalif Simt Chalnay Say
Kabhe Manzil Nahe Milti
To Phir Kyun Waqt Khotey Ho
Chalo ,Ab Faisla Ker Lo,

Sana_1 · April 22, 2007, 7:29pm

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Dushwari · April 23, 2007, 1:44am

Re: chalo ab faisla karlo

very nice poem, Tahreem.

you have a great skill of wording good thoughts
through your poetry.
:)

dushwari

tahreem_saeed · April 23, 2007, 3:30am

Re: chalo ab faisla karlo

thnaks dushwari jee and sana

deep_ocean · April 23, 2007, 4:59am

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it is awesome, very beautifull

Shab-e-Hijar · April 23, 2007, 5:44pm

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beautifullll :k:

Addie · April 26, 2007, 9:14am

Re: chalo ab faisla karlo

good

Jhanjharewali · April 26, 2007, 11:37am

Re: chalo ab faisla karlo

nice

Dhoop · April 27, 2007, 3:30am

Re: chalo ab faisla karlo

beautiful.......

the last line should be:

"chalo ab "faasla" kar lo

Gondal_007 · April 27, 2007, 4:15am

Re: chalo ab faisla karlo

bohat khooob tahreem saeed