Chahat..

redidentity · September 3, 2007, 4:30am

Aik Nazm,

Jaanan Tum Se Mujhko Tou
Bay-Panaah Chahat Hai
Aur Meri Chahat Main
Inteha Ki Shiddat Hai
Aur Iss Main Shamil Hai
Dil Meray Ki Gehrai
Jazba-e-Mohabbat Ki
Mohtaram Sach-chai
Aashqi Meri Iss Main
Aur Iss Ki Raa-nai
Per Rasm-e-Dunya Se
Mujh Ko Khauf-e-Ruswai
Iss Leay Meri Chahat
Pichhlay Ka-ii Barsoon Takk
Honton Pe Nahi Aai

(Ahmer)

Umeed Hai Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

_Masoom_Muskaan · September 3, 2007, 6:07am

Re: Chahat..

ab kio aee:D

nice one uncle koch words samg nehe ae:halo:

redidentity · September 3, 2007, 7:09am

Re: Chahat..

Thnk You Masoom :)

Prince_Ali · September 3, 2007, 3:56pm

Re: Chahat..

buhut khub! nice effort :k:

SJ · September 3, 2007, 5:40pm

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its really beautiful…
n really amazing feelin of love…
:k:
u r always the Best

Dushwari · September 3, 2007, 6:20pm

Re: Chahat..

good eiteraaf poem, Ahmer.

thanks for sharing.

Dushwari

Amal · September 3, 2007, 6:44pm

Re: Chahat..

Nicely done Ahmer Likhtey raho aur hamaarey saath share kartey raho... :)

redidentity · September 4, 2007, 4:14am

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Prince Ali, sonia_jee, Dushwari and Amal Jee.. Thanks alot for your appreciation.. em so glad ke ye nazm aap logon ko pasand ae.. for all of U..

tum_bin_1 · September 4, 2007, 11:38am

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**Beautiful **

redidentity · September 4, 2007, 11:47am

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Thank You tum_bin :)

Minerva · September 5, 2007, 6:59am

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:) nicely expressed...

AQ · September 5, 2007, 7:05am

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Ahmer..... I like the flow and the expression... though I have a feeling that you wanted to say something more... or you ought to have said something more laikin poori baat tumhaaraY hoNtoN tukk naa aai??? :)

redidentity · September 5, 2007, 7:12am

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Jee.. Aisa He Hai..

astonished on expression reading

redidentity · September 5, 2007, 7:13am

Re: Chahat..

Thank You Jee.. :)