.....CHAANDNI KA SHABAAB.......

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Doston Aap sab Ke Liye…Enjoy & Comment !

Kitna Dilkash Hai Chaandni Ka Shabaab,
Kis qadar Pur Asar Hai Tanhayee…
Jaise Shair Ke Zahn Ki Takhleeq -
Jaise Bewaa Ki Bhooki Angrayee !!!

Darwesh !

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Re: .....CHAANDNI KA SHABAAB.......

very nice.

trying to follow the meter.

"jaiseye mejboor ki bey-basi ka unt ho zahir shumar
kisi intiha-e-bey rukhee ki unmol pash-e-'mani'
iss keye wasteye, kitni pur asr hey iss ki tenhai
jeb kher dali is neye ma-ha - lehaaz ki ruswai"

dushwari

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Dushwari ji...

Achhi Koshish Hai....Keep it up !

Darwesh !

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wel try per kuch bat bani nahi yaar. but keep it up brother.

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Koi Batlaaye Ke Hum Batlaayen Kiya ?

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very nice specially phele misara..though I would suggest change a little and then It will be prefect....why don't you open another thread of it?:)