*“chaand”
kwaab me dekha tha us chaand
ki phailti huwi chaandi ko
rooshan huwa tha kal raat
mere kamre ka koona koona
mehkaa ghaya tha muJh ko bhi
mere kamre ke saath saath
aaya tha binna dastak ke
chaand mere aashiyaane me…
*
I dont know much about urdu grammar,
so there might be some mistakes here and there..
Just wrote what I thought, 
wow tht was lovely:k: :k:
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Bohat khoob:k:…keep it up…and thanx for sharing:)
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*Originally posted by hanie: *
*"chaand"
kwaab me dekha tha us chaand
ki phailti huwi chaandi ko
rooshan huwa tha kal raat
mere kamre ka koona koona
mehkaa ghaya tha muJh ko bhi
mere kamre ke saath saath
aaya tha binna dastak ke
chaand mere aashiyaane me...
*
I dont know much about urdu grammar,
so there might be some mistakes here and there..
Just wrote what I thought, :)
[/QUOTE]
Very Nice Hanie, Thanks for sharing!
wow! HAnie sis…that is zabardast…keep it up:flower1:
thats very cute hanie :)
Keep it up!
Bahut hi zabardast !
zabardast kia kehna hanie!
thanx for letting us read it 
its very nice!
very nice :k:
keep it up
woww haniee zaberdast :k:
keep it up
wah ji wah:k:
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wah :k:
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nice try “Honey” keep it up …
4 u…
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beautiful:k:keep it up
Nice one Hanie keep it up 
sis
achha hai hanie jii..daad kubul kijiye..
Aur likhti rahiye.....
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Its beautiful hanie :k:
Original and beautiful :)
Keep sharing your thoughts
Thanx :)
sorry for the late entry… 
really appriciated it wadde wadde lough coming to this thread and liking my own piece of thought…
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