chaand ki haNsee zameeN par uDaaya na karo

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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yun to dard o gham mera fav. subject hai magar es baar eik romantic koshish kii hai…aap log hii bataaeye kis hud tak success hua hooN…

chehre se apne zulf yuklakht hataaya na karo
chaand ki haNsee zameeN par uDaaya na karo

kahte haiN ke husn khud pe bhii mar jaata hai
aaine ke rubaroo bekhauff tum jaayaa na karo

abhee to pahla saal hai parde meiN raho zara
aaNgan kii dhoop meiN ab zulf sukhaaya na karo

suna hai phool bhii baDe aashiq mijaaz hote haiN
tum chaman meiN kabhee saNwar ke aaya na karo

ye to har pal lab bosii kii taak meiN rahta hai
beadab aaNchal ko etna sar chaDhaaya na karo

tumhaari naadaani ko log kuchh aur samajh lenge
har eik ko es umar meiN hamraaz banaaya na kao

pahle to bojh e shabaab se waaqif to ho lo zara
yuN jhuk ke har cheez ko ab uThaaya na karo

es shahar meiN qatl e aam baDi baat nahiN hai
apne gajre se koii kalii sar e raah giraaya na karo

raatoN kii bechainii aur bister ki silwateiN
kisi ko bhii ab ye baateiN bataaya na karo

ooske luft pe mera dum na kaheeN nikal jaaye
tum takiye ko etni zor se dabaayaa na karo

log tumheiN apnii lakeeroN meiN basaa lenge
yuN mehdii se saje haath sabko dikhaaya na karo

yahaaN sab log qayaamat kii nazar rakhte haiN
sab ke saamne mujhe pyaar se bulaaya na karo

mujhe khud pe bhii ab gurur aa jaataa hai
mujhe naaz se etna tum manaaya na karo

tumhaara aazmaana bhii ye kitna jaanleva hai
tareef e hareef kar ke mujhe sataayaa na karo

manzil e raah e ishq nahiN aasaaN meri jaan
meri nazroN meiN ye khwaab sajaaya na karo

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Beautiful !!!!

Zabar Dast !!!!

Keep it Up

Khush Raho!!!

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Zordar pramod

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bahut hi khoob koshish parmod ji

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nice try Pra g..but u know k Nikami ka taste thora diff hai ..but still it's nice for them jin ka taste..thansk 4 sharin......and keep smilling..:)

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Zabardast !

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Re: chaand ki haNsee zameeN par uDaaya na karo

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
manzil e raah e ishq nahiN aasaaN meri jaan
meri nazroN meiN ye khwaab sajaaya na karo
[/QUOTE]

hmmm...khaasi mukhtalif hey...anyhow...thanx for sharing:)

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boht achei :k:

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:~)

Thanks for sharing !

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honsla afzaai ke liye aap sabhii ka bahot bahot shukriya.

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
nice try Pra g..but u know k Nikami ka taste thora diff hai ..but still it's nice for them jin ka taste..thansk 4 sharin......and keep smilling..:)
[/QUOTE]

Bahna, u know, i m a beginner in this field. And what I learned from great Urdu poets is that we should be versatile. So it was a try.ishq o dard o gham pe to main kuch na kuchh tukbandii kar hi leta hoon..soncha es baar thoda change karooN.

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:) very nice

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Acchi hai :)

thanks for sharing :)

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thanks nikki and Chand jii.