chaand aur sooraj

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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ek dil waloon ki basti thi
jahan chaand aur sooraj rehtey the
kuch sooraj mann ka pagal tha
kuch chaand bhi shooq chanchal tha
basti basti phirte the
her pal hastey rehtey the
phir ek din doonu rhoot gaye
saare sapney toot gaye
ab chaand bhi us waqt ata hai
suraj jub so jata hai
badal sub khetey hain
suraj uljha rehta hai
chaand ke sath sitarey hain
per sooraj tanha rehta hai

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Re: chaand aur sooraj

:teary2: rula dia na phir bechara suraj he tanha hoga us mei to tapish hai na aur chand ki to narm thandi roshni jo hai :frowning: poor sun !

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maine tu aisey he ek nazam likhi thi aap ne tu pora lecture he dey diya
aap se tu tauba hai

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tauba ALLAH se karni chiaye ! jo becharay chand aur suraj k dil k halaat sab k samnay rakh diye :(

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mujey tu maaf karen aap

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tum ne mera dil tora janay kion akeyla chora
phir bhi mei ne tumse dil saaf kia
jao jao jao tumhein maaf kia :)

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nawazish shukriya karam mehrbani
hamain baksh di aap ne zindagani

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haan yeh hui na baat ! shukriya adaa pehle he kar daiti to yeh nobat na aati !

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pehle kis cheez ka shukriya kerti
waisey ab bhi kis cheez ka shukriya ada kiya maine

Women are boss?
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kiddo faraar :hehe:

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Very nice.

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Ashi very good poem.....

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THANKU

Stalking
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Re: chaand aur sooraj

Nice bohot achi hai. Great.

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nice one.....

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v nice

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excellent :k:

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*very nice and beautifull *

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:teary1:
dono phir se dilruba nahi ban sakten?

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haan miltey hain na jub sooraj ghiran lagta hai
per thori dair ke liye:bummer: