Re: Can I have your honest opinion
don't put the slash in, it ruins it.
how about...
"Neice 1, Neice 2 and Neice 3
invite you to the Rasm-e-Hina (shouldn't this be Henna, as in mehendi, and not hina, as in a girl's name?) of
their beloved khala and phuppo
Dulhan_to_be etc."
i'm sure your family will know your relation to each girl.