Can I have your honest opinion about the following wording to put on mehndi invites.. and also can you let me know if i've spelt the urdu incorrectly..
Aay hai mehndi ki raat... Sajaneh hai dulhan ke haat... Lekin chahiye aap sub ka saat...
Neice 1, Neice 2 and Neice 3 invite you to the Rasm-e-Hina of
Dulhan_to_be
Inshallah on a date in August at a place in Wales
Awaiting,
Sis-in-law 1, Sister, Sis-in-law 2
Changed it now to:
Aay hai mehndi ki raat...
Sajaneh hai dulhan ke haat...
Aur chahiye aap sub ka saat...
Neice 1, Neice 2 and Neice 3
invite you to the Rasm-e-Henna of their beloved Phuppo and Khala
Dulhan_to_be
Inshallah on
a date in August
at
a place in Wales
Awaiting,
Sis-in-law 1, Sister, Sis-in-law 2
Final change now and being sent to the card wale.. Yahay, another job ticked off the list!