by me.....

i wrote this a long time ago and today when i was looking my old diary i foud this so thought y not to shre:)
mujhe likhna nahi ata but still kahbhi khbar totay pohtay alfaaz likh date hoon.
one more thing that i would really appreciate if u tell me truth:)
if u don’t like it plz say ‘ghazal u suck’ and if u like then give me ur comments:flower1:

woh janta hai in sawaloon ke jawab magar phir be woh aksar yehee sawal pochta hai mujh se kion tumhare zaat,tumhara khail bekhar gaya hai? kion chor diyen hain tum ne khuwab dekhne? kion dil hain dota dota sa,kion rehte ho koye koye se? kion her aik ke leye sawal sa ban gayee ho? kion muskarne per bhi aa jatein hain ansoo aankhon mein? woh aksar yehee sawal pochta hain mujh se kion pata hoon her mehfal mein udaas tumhain? kion tanhayeoon se piyar sa ho geya hain tumhain? kion melten hain sokhe hoyee gulab ketaboon mein se tumharee? woh aksar yehee sawal pochta hain mujh se kion pasand hain tumhain andeharoon mein behtna? kion pasand hain tumhain kantoon pe chalna? kion bujhaa dete ho jaltey hoye charrag umeed ke? woh aksar yehee sawal pochta hain mujh se kion khail hai tumhayeen zamane kia itna? kion kehte hoon tum aur mein hain nadee ke do kenaree ne milne ke leye jin ke darmian hain zamana,asool aur rakh-rakhaoo pane ke manind woh aksar yehee sawal povhta hain mujh se

honestly, it's really nice gk, specially the poem's pace makes it even more enjoyable to read.. :)

i havent read it but it looks nice :k:

Re: by me…

woh janta hai in sawaloon ke jawab magar phir be
woh aksar yehee sawal pochta hai mujh se
kion tumhare zaat,tumhara khail bekhar gaya hai?

dil maiN jub pachtawaa hau tau miTTanay kay liye, dil kee tassali kay liye woh jawaab dhooNdhay jaatay haiN, jo apnay dil say na mil rahay houN :slight_smile: kay agar koie aur woh jawaab day day tau shaayad aik bahaanaa mil jaaye dil ko behlaanay kaa.. iss liye pocchtaa ho gaa :slight_smile:

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kion chor diyen hain tum ne khuwab dekhne?
kion dil hain dota dota sa,kion rehte ho koye koye se?
kion her aik ke leye sawal sa ban gayee ho?
kion muskarne per bhi aa jatein hain ansoo aankhon mein?**

dil ToRR kar jaanay waalay kay paas bhee shayad dil hota hay aur ehsaas bhee :~) afsos dil ko uss nay pathar aur ehsaas ko banjar zameen banaa liyaa hotaa hay :slight_smile:

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woh aksar yehee sawal pochta hain mujh se
kion pata hoon her mehfal mein udaas tumhain?
kion tanhayeoon se piyar sa ho geya hain tumhain?
kion melten hain sokhe hoyee gulab ketaboon mein se tumharee?**

apnay diye huvay tohfay khud passaNd nahiN shayad uss ko :flower1:

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woh aksar yehee sawal pochta hain mujh se
kion pasand hain tumhain andeharoon mein behtna?
kion pasand hain tumhain kantoon pe chalna?
kion bujhaa dete ho jaltey hoye charrag umeed ke?**

in andherouN aur kaaNtouN maiN koie khud dhakail jaaye kissi ko, uss par sawaal.. chay ma’ani darad!

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woh aksar yehee sawal pochta hain mujh se
kion khail hai tumhayeen zamane kia itna?
kion kehte hoon tum aur mein hain nadee ke do kenaree ne milne ke leye
jin ke darmian hain zamana,asool aur rakh-rakhaoo pane ke manind
woh aksar yehee sawal pochta hain mujh se**

:slight_smile: GKK: that was something so impressive and written by a affected heart :flower1:

I must say that its a wonderful effort … :k::k::k:

Chal jhottii

wonderful ...Gkk

GKK.....!

Although as per My Soauch... Wazan sort of things maiN a bit Improvement Needed... BUT.. as as WHole... Its Zabardas :)

Keep It Up

beautiful :k: :flower1:

:-)

~TaNhAyAaN~ thanks a lot sis…ur words really encourage me to write more :flower1:

BoReD-iN-BrIsBaNe ok but plz read it and tell me :slight_smile:

Anwaar Qureshi ap say yeh saray mein nau sawal nahi pochay thay:halo: :stuck_out_tongue: but still thanks a lot for liking:flower1:

Amarbailthanks a lot:flower1:

Azad yeh mein nay khud likhe hia:hoonh:
u better encourage mebailan

Lamhay appi thanks a lot:flower1: :hug:

Golden_Scorpion ok next time mein is baat ka dehaan rakho gee and thanks a lot for ur words:flower1:

cuteepie thanks a lot:flower1:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh thanks for ur smile:flower1:

Ps: one more time thanks a lot for ur words and good suggestions:flower1: it will really help me…:slight_smile:

:k:

Beautiful GKK :flower1: :k: bohat acha likha hai…:slight_smile: do share some more of your work with us…:slight_smile:

Prince Ali thanks a lot for ur thumb:halo: :stuck_out_tongue: :flower1:

pasoo appi aww thanks a lot:hug: hien do u think so:blush:
i’ll share for sure and very soon:flower1:

It is simply great....

very nice....!!!

Dilsay-----------thanks a lot for ur reply:flower1:
it’ll help me:flower1:

Mertaab--------thanksa lot:flower1:

wo seb sawalon kei javab jantei bojtei hue tum sei wohe sawal kerta hei :smash: :stuck_out_tongue:

btw boht khob lekhe hei gazlooo:kiss:
muge tum sei ese koe umed nehe the :bummer:

haan na:-( :crying:
awww thanks a alot yaar:kiss::hug:
:hoonh::smash: mein to is se bhi ziada acha likh sakte hoonh:snooty:

PS: kahan ho:smash: