by Incomplete again

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Mein nazar se pee raha houn, ye samaa badal naa jaaye
Naa jhukaao tum palken,kahin raat dhal naa jaaye
Mere askh bhi hain is mein,ye sharaab ubal naa jaaye
Mera jaam chhune waale, tera haath jal naa jaaye
Abhi raat kuch hai baaki,naa uthaa naqaab saaqi
Tera deewana girte girte, kahin phir sambhal na jaaye

(~)
without u all 'am going 2 b is INCOMPLETE

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Very nice Incomplete :flower1:

BUT in my RAM is Saying that its…

Naa jhukaao tum Nigaahein,kahin raat dhal naa jaaye

:slight_smile:

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thanks 4 compliments

and u r absolutely right that word was nigahein
but i think palke is most suitable word here isn't it??

thanx once again

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ita quite nice..

i wish I could say something i.e. shaayeri

what is askh???

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Aray kia karaiN.. Ab Shair Uncle ne NigaheiN likh dia hay tou Hum kauN hotay haiN badalnay walay :smiley:

Hum Hain… its a typo… its not askh … its … Ashk … Meanz Ansooo :slight_smile:

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:k: