... by Amal.

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

Kabhi muskuraana kabhi rootth jaana, kabhi dil lubhaana kabhi dil jalaana
kaha tha na meiN ney ke kal hum jo bichrey, to yehi sab adaaeiN sataya kareiN gi

haathoN pe aksar mera naam likh kar, laboN sey mohabbat ki mohreiN lagaana
bhala kya khabar thi ke yehi pyari baateiN, kabhi dil ko khooN bhi rulaaya kareiN gi

kahaa jab bhi us sey ke darakhtoN pe aesey, Khudara koi apni nishaani na chorro
wo kehta tha aksar chalo is bahaaney, tumhey yaadeiN to hamaari aaya kareiN gi

teri hi zubaaN ke ye gul the na dil’bar, kabhi jo bahaaroN ney mooN tujh sey morra
to hamaari mohabbat ki maasoom kalyaaN, terey dil ka gulshan sajaaya kareiN gi

tabasum si nazmeiN taranum si ghazleiN, terey sath mil kar hum likhtey raheiN ge
diloN ki dhunoN pe mohabat ke naghmey, sada dharkaneiN gungunaya kareiN gi

ye bhi tera hi bayaaN tha na jaanam, ke kabhi jo andheroN ney tujhey aan ghera
to hamaari nigaaheiN terey raastoN par, sitaaroN ki shammeiN jalaaya kareiN gi

fiza ke laboN pe ab bhi rawaaN heiN, teri saari qasmeiN, terey saarey waadey
mujhey kya pata tha terey baad hum’dum, hawaeiN terey lafz dohraya kareiN gi

khaab har dikhaya magar ye na bataaya, ke kya loat kar tu aa bhi sakey ga
kabhi jo muraadoN ki pareshaN duwaaeiN, tujhey do gharri ko bulaaya kareiN gi

[redidentity]

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beautiful..

[saqi476]

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so nice

[sanadubai]

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nice 1

[Mindless]

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Amal is my favorite poet. Dont know where he has gone? When he is going to publish his poetry book I wonder. I really want all his work! Ghazal kisi ke if you are in contact with him, please say my salam to him. I hope he remembers me.

[Shab-e-Hijar]

beautiful!

[Heiress1]

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good 1..

[WiseGuy]

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nice sharing GKK :)

[ATA]

@ghazal_kisi_ke

Kabhi muskuraana kabhi rootth jaana, kabhi dil lubhaana kabhi dil jalaana
kaha tha na meiN ney ke kal hum jo bichrey, to yehi sab adaaeiN sataya kareiN gi

…

Amal ki kia tareef karain… sooraj ko chiragh kia dikhana…

Amal ap litni khoobsoorti say ehsasaat, yadoN, jazbaat ko alfaz main dhaal kar phir un alfaaz ko kitnay tareeqay say sajatay ho… mashAllah

@Mindless

Amal is my favorite poet. Dont know where he has gone? When he is going to publish his poetry book I wonder. I really want all his work! Ghazal kisi ke if you are in contact with him, please say my salam to him. I hope he remembers me.

Ap khud kahan hain mohtarma ? koi ata pata ?

and **Ghazal ** thank you for posting and where are you too ?

[Mindless]

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^ Hiya mein yahin mujhe kahan jana hai :) how are you?

[Starlight]

It's Nice.

[ATA]

@Mindless

^ Hiya mein yahin mujhe kahan jana hai how are you?

kahan bolay to ? larkion ko to ‘wahan’ jaana hota hay yeh bhi nee pata

main waisa he theek and thaak waak, … its been like 6-7 years we talked …

[Mindless]

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^ Its been like after so many years I am visiting this GS!! Missing all the old guppies...very few people I find here...specially all the girls have lost somewhere :-/

[Aryaan]

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Nice Sharing Ghazal..:k:

[ghazal_kisi_ke]

@ATA

Amal ki kia tareef karain… sooraj ko chiragh kia dikhana…

Amal ap litni khoobsoorti say ehsasaat, yadoN, jazbaat ko alfaz main dhaal kar phir un alfaaz ko kitnay tareeqay say sajatay ho… mashAllah

Ap khud kahan hain mohtarma ? koi ata pata ?

and **Ghazal ** thank you for posting and where are you too ?

asalam o lakum ata bahii!! Gosh, haven’t seen you in AGES! me around, how have you been?

[ATA]

@Mindless

^ Its been like after so many years I am visiting this GS!! Missing all the old guppies…very few people I find here…specially all the girls have lost somewhere :-/

Yeah I know F its been ages, those sensible people are left this world and now jo bhi bachay hain aisay hi hain hehe, well where is N-Girl ? and Aleezay is here some times comes, Fantastic1 is lost as well, who else ?

@ghazal_kisi_ke

asalam o lakum ata bahii!! Gosh, haven’t seen you in AGES! me around, how have you been?

w’salam Chanda, bas yehen kabhi kabhi … sab puaranay pata nahi kahan chalay gayay… ab wo baat nahi yahan…
ap sunain… how is life and what are doing these days ?
I am mashAlah all right…

[Bushra]

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Buhat khub:k:
haathoN pe aksar mera naam likh kar, laboN sey mohabbat ki mohreiN lagaana

[Mindless]

Yeah I know F its been ages, those sensible people are left this world and now jo bhi bachay hain aisay hi hain hehe, well where is N-Girl ? and Aleezay is here some times comes, Fantastic1 is lost as well, who else ?

Norway Girl? No idea where is she. She was my very first friend of GS!! There was Aleezay, Fantastic1 and X-Communist, Qrius, nia_khan!! sighz I miss all these ladies!!

[nia_khan]

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he is my favorite poet as well :)

very nice human being as well :)

[KKF]

**salaam,

aapkii pesh kardah Ghazal nazar navaaz huii...bunyaadii taur par yeh Ghazal laaiq e dada o taHseen hai magar chuN k mujhe 'ilm nahiiN k yeh Ghazal kis shaa'ir kii taKhleeq hai magar andaazah hotaa k kisii ustaad shaa'ir kii nahiiN hai. is Ghazal ke islsile se chand ek baateN 'arz karne kii ijaazat chaahuuNgaa:

-awwalan to yeh k is Ghazal kii bahr Khaasii taveel hai jiske saath shaa'ir ne bharpoor insaaf nahiiN kiyaa hai...jaa ba jaa bahr kaa masalah darpesh hai. isii liye ustaadoN ne farmaayaa hai k chhoTii bahr meN Ghazal goyii aasaan nisbatan aasaan hotii hai

-is Ghazal meN matl'a aur maqt'a donoN hii Ghaayab haiN. wa(A)llah 'aalam k shaa'ir ne Ghazal ke in zaroorii 'anaasir ko zaroorii nahiiN samjhaa yaa kaatib se sahvan aisaa huaa.

-ash'aar meN jaa ba jaa izaafii alfaaz maujood haiN jo she'r ko Khaarij-az-baHr kar dete haiN so in aGhlaat [jsikii nishaan-dehii amiN ne laal raushnaaii se kar dii hai] kii tas'HeeH farmaa lijiiye, shukria.

** kaha tha na meiN ney ke kal hum jo bichrey, to yeh sab adaaeiN sataya kareiN gi

bhala kya khabar thi yehi pyari baateiN, kabhi dil ko khooN bhi rulaaya kareiN gi

kahaa jab bhi us sey darakhtoN pe aesey, Khudara koi bhii nishaani na chorro

wo kehta tha aksar chalo is bahaaney, tumheN merii yaadeN to** aaya kareiN gi**
teri hi zubaaN ke ye gul the na dil'bar, kabhi jo bahaaroN ney mooN tujh sey morra
**
is misr'e meN zabaan o bayaan aur sarf o nahv kii bahooot KhaamiyaaN aur kamiyaaN haiN jise Theek karne se bahtar hai k shaa'ir koii dusraa misr'a kahe**.

hamaari mohabbat ki maasoom kalyaaN, terey dil ka gulshan sajaaya kareiN gi
**
tabasum si nazmeiN taranum si ghazleiN, terey sath mil karjo**** likhtey raheiN ge

yahaN "tabassum sii nazmeN" aur "tarannum sii nazmeN" kii tarkeeb-e-iste'maalii qawaa'id e zabaan kii roo se saHeeH nahiiN haiN. agar "mutabassim sii nazmeN" aur "mutarannim sii nazmeN" hotaa to koii muzaa'iqa na hotaa...neez, lafz-e-"nazmeN" kaa do baar iste'maal takrara e lafzii ke zumur meN aataa hai jise ustaad e fanoon Ghazal-goyii kaa ek noqs qaraar dete haiN. un meN se ek ba-aasaanii "GhazleN" kah sakte the :)**
**
ye bhi tera hi bayaaN tha na jaanam, ke kabhi jo andheroN ney tujhey aan ghera
to hamaari nigaaheiN terey raastoN par, sitaaroN ki shammeiN jalaaya kareiN gi**
**
is she'r meN hoo-ba-hoo vohii noqs hai jo she'r number 4 meN darpesh aa chukaa hai...lihaaza, us she'r par meraa tabsiraa mulaaHiza farmaayeN...shukria****

fiza ke laboN pe ab bhi rawaaN heiN, teri saari qasmeiN, terey saarey waadey
mujhey kya pata tha terey baad hum'dum, hawaeiN terey lafz dohraya kareiN gi**
**
yeh she'r vazan aur bahr ke Hawaale se giraa huaa hai aur zabaan o bayaan kaa bhii masalah dar-pesh hai**
**
khaab har dikhaya magar ye na bataaya, ke kya loat kar tu aa bhi sakey ga
kabhi jo muraadoN ki pareshaN duwaaeiN, tujhey do gharri ko bulaaya kareiN gi****

ek baar phir is she'r meN bahr, vazan, zabaan kaa masla hai hii us ke hamraah misro'N meN ham-aahangii nahiiN...goyaa, misr'e be-rabt haiN

faqat Khaak-nashiiN
_______KKF**

Kabhi muskuraana kabhi rootth jaana, kabhi dil lubhaana kabhi dil jalaana kaha tha na meiN ney ke kal hum jo bichrey, to yehi sab adaaeiN sataya kareiN gi

haathoN pe aksar mera naam likh kar, laboN sey mohabbat ki mohreiN lagaana bhala kya khabar thi ke yehi pyari baateiN, kabhi dil ko khooN bhi rulaaya kareiN gi

kahaa jab bhi us sey ke darakhtoN pe aesey, Khudara koi apni nishaani na chorro wo kehta tha aksar chalo is bahaaney, tumhey yaadeiN to hamaari aaya kareiN gi

teri hi zubaaN ke ye gul the na dil'bar, kabhi jo bahaaroN ney mooN tujh sey morra to hamaari mohabbat ki maasoom kalyaaN, terey dil ka gulshan sajaaya kareiN gi

tabasum si nazmeiN taranum si ghazleiN, terey sath mil kar jo likhtey raheiN ge diloN ki dhunoN pe mohabat ke naghmey, sada dharkaneiN gungunaya kareiN gi

ye bhi tera hi bayaaN tha na jaanam, ke kabhi jo andheroN ney tujhey aan ghera to hamaari nigaaheiN terey raastoN par, sitaaroN ki shammeiN jalaaya kareiN gi

fiza ke laboN pe ab bhi rawaaN heiN, teri saari qasmeiN, terey saarey waadey mujhey kya pata tha terey baad hum'dum, hawaeiN terey lafz dohraya kareiN gi

khaab har dikhaya magar ye na bataaya, ke kya loat kar tu aa bhi sakey ga kabhi jo muraadoN ki pareshaN duwaaeiN, tujhey do gharri ko bulaaya kareiN gi