This is the poem i worte when i was in my 9th standard…not that good but i like it…
All around us
Everything is fuss
No one can smile
even for a while
Men in enmity
women in hostility
BUT
I can find my dreams
at the top of my screams
in my world of imagination
where everything is of my inlination
I can enjoy there
with lot of love and lot of care
But
THese are dreams as crytals in showcase
I am here and I have to face…
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Its Beautiful … I cant Even Write Like this now wat U wrote it in Grade 9 
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aahh...
THese are dreams as crytals in showcase
I am here and I have to face..............
Assalamoalaikum Barbie_girl
well said , very nicely written
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writting :)
Allah hafiz
Sodaii
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in my world of imagination
where everything is of my inclination
I can enjoy there
with lot of love and lot of care
HaaN magar tum jaantaY ho YaadaiN mukhtasir naheeN hoteeN :)
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kabhi kabhi ho bhi jati hain...pata nahi kaisay...
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long term memory loss due to the supplication of the poet who said:(
Yaad-e-Maazi azaab hai yaa Rub
Cheen laY mujh saY Haafizah meraa
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nahi. aisa nahi hai..werna is waqt tak mai marr chuki hoti........
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marz-e-nisyaan
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hmmmm
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^
Azad in making
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nice Barbie! 
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buhat achchay...thax for sharing BG
(waisay yaadain mukhtasir karnay k liyay saharoo'n ki zarorat hoti hay)
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oh sorry 
ankh lag gaie thi . . . . well its superb poem :k: