Buland kirdar si aankhian

[LP]

Buland kirdar si aankhian

wo khush guftaar si aankhain

mohabbat ki negehbaaN hain
dar o dewaar si aankhain

nameeda sabnami gulpoosh
gul o gulzar si aankhain

dehekti dhoop main thandak
ghany ashjar si aankhain

khazina hian wo yadoon ka
haseen pandar si aankhain

hikayat hain khmoshi ki
wohi iqrar si aankhain

ghata palkoon pe rakhti hain
abad imtar si aankhain

kamal e husn o raanai
sukhan, ashaar si aankhain

kitab e drd k oraq
haziN afgar si aankhain

khamooshi khush kalami si
saba izhar si aankhin

hain Aashi hast ka sehra
meri sansar si aankhain

[ajazali]

Re: Buland kirdar si aankhian

kitnay shair hain total , scroll karta hun phir pichli counting bhool jata hun

[muqawwee123]

Re: Buland kirdar si aankhian

Nice one LP :k:

[LP]

Re: Buland kirdar si aankhian

@ajazali

kitnay shair hain total , scroll karta hun phir pichli counting bhool jata hun

scroll up n down nai sher read karain

@muqawwee123

Nice one LP :k:

thank you

[ajazali]

Re: Buland kirdar si aankhian

@Little Princess

scroll up n down nai sher read karain

aap nai bhi poem ki bajay, burj ul arab share kar dia hai

[LP]

Re: Buland kirdar si aankhian

@ajazali

aap nai bhi poem ki bajay, burj ul arab share kar dia hai

lazy looggggg

[ajazali]

Re: Buland kirdar si aankhian

@Little Princess

lazy looggggg

eska matlb apko samjh aa gayi

[LP]

Re: Buland kirdar si aankhian

@ajazali

eska matlb apko samjh aa gayi

lazy ka ?

[ajazali]

Re: Buland kirdar si aankhian

@Little Princess

lazy ka ?

nai, similarity(height wise) between your poem and burjul arab