Bujha diya

blueangel · January 27, 2011, 8:04pm

Bujha diya hai khud apney haathon
mohabbat ka diya jala key
teri wafaa ney aujhar di hein
umeed ki bastiyan basa key

Tujhey bhula dein apney dil sey
yeh faisla tau kiya hai lekin
na dil ko maloom hai na hum ko key
jieyen gey kesey tujhe bhula key

Kabhi milgaye jo raastey main tau
munh phair kar palat phair lengey
kaheen sunay gay jo tera naam tau
chup rahengey nazar jhuka key

Na sochney per bhi sochta hun
ke zindagi mein kya rahega
teri tamanna ko dafna ker
terey khayaalon sey duur ja ker.

Shab-e-Hijar · January 27, 2011, 8:16pm

Re: Bujha diya

Nice :k:

UZ · January 28, 2011, 4:09am

Re: Bujha diya

Not bad :k:

Amal · January 28, 2011, 4:52pm

Re: Bujha diya

blueangel ye aap ki poem hey? Good one k:

blueangel · January 28, 2011, 4:56pm

Re: Bujha diya

^ no no not mine. I just liked it :)

Aryaan · January 30, 2011, 3:09am

Re: Bujha diya

Nice One BlueAngel..:k:

Najim · January 30, 2011, 4:32am

Re: Bujha diya

I dont know who wrote this poem, magar jiss tarah type ki gaee hay wazan per nahi baith'tee, iss liyay sahi tarah say (wazan bana kar) type kar raha hoon. Kyon keh mujhay sher parhnay ka maza nahi aata agar wazan main naa ho to.

Bujha diya hai khud apney haathon mohabbatoon ka diya jala key
teri wafaa ney aujhar di hein umeed ki bastiyan basa key

Tujhey bhula dein gay apney dil sey yeh faisla tau kiya hai lekin
na dil ko maloom hai na hum ko, keh jieyen kesey tujhe bhula key

Kabhi milo gaye jo raastey main tau ham palat kar munh phair lengey
kaheen sunain gay jo naam tera tau chup rahengey nazar jhuka key

Na sochney per bhi sochta hun ke zindagi mein kya bach rahega
teri tamanna ko' dafna ker terey khayaalon sey duur ja key.

waleedhbk · January 30, 2011, 6:19am

Re: Bujha diya

Ache hai :)