buhat kuchh suN lee'ya main nay

Koyal · January 13, 2011, 2:54pm

***buhat kuch keh dee’ya Tum nay
buhat kuchh suN lee’ya main nay
mujhay ab tum ijazat do
mujhay us day’es jana hai
jahaaN paR chahto’N kay geet
Koyel gungunati ho ***

bheegiyaad · January 13, 2011, 3:05pm

Re: buhat kuchh suN lee'ya main nay

ijazat hai but kuch yahan b gunguna k suna do aap

Amal · January 13, 2011, 3:09pm

Re: buhat kuchh suN lee’ya main nay

Wo to aap yahaaN bhi gunguna sakti heiN, us ke leeye aap ko kisi aur day’es jaaney ki zaroorat nahi hey… By the way…nice sharing…achi nazm hey k: …

KKF · January 13, 2011, 3:12pm

Re: buhat kuchh suN lee'ya main nay

gungunaa hi kiuN? baa aawaaz e baland aur baa tarannum sunaayeN...ham ne apne kaanoN meN kaun sii rooii ThooNs rakkhi hai...hehe...sho'la maqaali, sho'la bayaanii, vo bhii qurb-e-makaanii!!! :)

Koyal · January 13, 2011, 3:23pm

Re: buhat kuchh suN lee'ya main nay

koyal pRindi hai aag nahi jo sholay barsaa'ey :p

fara · January 13, 2011, 4:00pm

Re: buhat kuchh suN lee'ya main nay

Bus Koyal abb tu kuch gungunaa he do...
humain bhee apni mudhur awaz say lubha he doo!!

Sheal · January 13, 2011, 6:22pm

Re: buhat kuchh suN lee'ya main nay

koyal ap yahan kookain sholay K2F barsaiN gay ;)

UZ · January 13, 2011, 11:11pm

Re: buhat kuchh suN lee’ya main nay

Nice nazam :k: Ab apnay deys key barey mein yeh kyalaat nahi atey balkay aisa lagta hai bahir jana parey gaa koyal ko sunnay ke liye acha hoa aap yahaan kookein

Aryaan · January 14, 2011, 3:30am

Re: buhat kuchh suN lee'ya main nay

Nice One Koyal..:)

Shazia_Arif · January 14, 2011, 12:41pm

Re: buhat kuchh suN lee'ya main nay

v nice koyal,koyal choice:)