May khanay jab hum phonchay
Larkharayta kadmoon say
Tu saqi nay kaha
Nashay main chour logoon ka
Yahan ana mana hai
Magar jana nahi
Mainay kaha ya kadam
Nashay say nahi
Balka
Kisi ke jhooti mohabat kay boojah say
Dag maga rahay hain
by: Dilsay
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Yeh qadam kisi ki jhooti mohabbat key boojh sey dagmaga rahey haiN
Very nice... Dilsay.. :-)
Re: Boojah…
Achi laga ka aap ko pasand aya…
Khush rahoo
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Doing it honestly, I will list this poem as the best you have ever shared with us. It has a story and a sequence and no 'extrra baggage' - a simple and a true poem. It does look like written by Dilsay :~) Thanx a lot for sharing with us.
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bohut khoob .. :k: ..
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Amal jee thanks for your comments they mean alot to me… jahan tak aap ke yaqeen kee bat hai tu ya mainay khud he leekhee hai… yahan kay lekhnay waloon ke shahari parh kar thora bohat asar lagta hai howa hai…
Khush rahain
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Buhat khoob alfaaz use kiye hain iss nazm mein, thanks for sharing:-) and welcome back
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Thanks and thanks for remembering… Khush rahoo
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Dilsay mera matlab tha ke dil ki gehraiyoN sey likhi hey, by heart. I know very well that you write yourself 
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Thanks Amal jee…
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Very Nice Theme… Dilsay 
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vnice bhae:k:
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Thanks Azad jee
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koi bat nahi, dilsay jab bhi giro ge hum kahain ge nice 1 :)
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apnea ap ko
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tu theek hai