Bahar ka matlab
janna wo jati khizan ka din tha
jab main ne tumhari janib
mohabat ka pahla qadam barhaiya
barhana darakhton ki shakhoon pe
bahar key istaqbal main
kuch nazuk se patey
ubhar rahey thay
mere dil ki zameen ki tarah
jis main tumhari mohabat ki
nanhi konplain
sar utha rahe theen
tumharey piyar ki barish key
pahley qatrey ne
un nanahi konplon ki
aisi abiyari ki
key mere dil ki zameen
sar sabz ho gaiye
is dil key koney koney main
barish key baad
halki sunhari dhoop ne
qoos-o-qazah ki kaman
bana di
aur mujhe pahli martaba
bahar ka matlab samajh aiya
Shabemah
janey waloo khabi guzrti bahar ka ehsaas bhi kertey jaaanaa
Agli rahoon mein kitney kantey khizaan ne bicha rukhey hein
tum ne tu aik dil ko humarey naam likha tha khabi ShabeMah
hum ne tu apni takdeer ke sub sukh tere nam luga rukhey hein
yeh sheer bhi ap hi ka hey naa, nice poetry :)
Amal
August 17, 2002, 10:59pm
3
Re: Bahar Ka Matlab…Nazm
*Originally posted by Shabemah: *
Bahar ka matlab
janna wo jati khizan ka din tha
jab main ne tumhari janib
mohabat ka pahla qadam barhaiya
barhana darakhton ki shakhoon pe
bahar key istaqbal main
kuch nazuk se patey
ubhar rahey thay
mere dil ki zameen ki tarah
jis main tumhari mohabat ki
nanhi konplain
sar utha rahe theen
tumharey piyar ki barish key
pahley qatrey ne
un nanahi konplon ki
aisi abiyari ki
key mere dil ki zameen
sar sabz ho gaiye
is dil key koney koney main
barish key baad
halki sunhari dhoop ne
qoos-o-qazah ki kaman
bana di
aur mujhe pahli martaba
bahar ka matlab samajh aiya
Shabemah
simply superb :k: … that’s a masterpiece…By the way
“dekha huwa sa chehra naam suna suna sa hey”
Am I right?
Amal,
Thanks so much and yes aap ne sahi pahchana "ye wohi cahra wohi naam hai"
Bhala kahen aur koi dosri ShabeMah?
Amal
August 18, 2002, 12:53am
5
Sunny Boy, Schahzad, Amal,
Buhut shukria hosla afzaiye ka Nazm to paiyesh kar doon lekin kiyunkey ye abhi ibtida hai isliye zara anday timatron se bach key chalon yehi schti hoon...
wese ye dekhiye meri dosri nazm hazir hai...
Nayab
August 18, 2002, 1:39pm
8
Bohot khoob…And welcome jee…
Sehar
August 18, 2002, 2:20pm
9
Thats very cute Shabemah :)
Nayab shukria, buhut buhut ab aa gaiye yahan to uthen gay nahi soch laiyen
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*Originally posted by ~Sehar~: *
Thats very cute Shabemah :)
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"Subah Ki Pahli Kiran" beautiful and thanks so much :)
nikii
August 18, 2002, 8:42pm
12
bhoot khoob shabemah ji :k: