bohut totey howey haiN hum abhi dastuk nahi dey'Na!

***bohut totey howey haiN hum
**abhi dastuk nahi dey’Na!
abhi aa’nkh hai puRnam
abhi dastuk nahi dena!!

abhi dil maiN hain kaYe ghum
abhi dastak nahi deNa!!
shab-e-Tanhai maiN abhi taRapna hAi buhat mujhkO
abhi hai daRd kuch madham abhi dastak nahi dena ..!!~ *

Re: bohut totey howey haiN hum abhi dastuk nahi dey'Na!

Woww..

*I should never read poetry, it makes me so sad- every time! :( *

Re: bohut totey howey haiN hum abhi dastuk nahi dey'Na!

nice :)

Re: bohut totey howey haiN hum abhi dastuk nahi dey'Na!

v nice:)

Re: bohut totey howey haiN hum abhi dastuk nahi dey’Na!

Nice One :k:

Re: bohut totey howey haiN hum abhi dastuk nahi dey'Na!

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its beautiful..

Woh pathar dil sahi hamara bhi ye dawa hai
Hamaray lab jinhe chu le wo pathar bol utte
Raaz-e-hasti kuch nahi aksar yehi dekha gia
Be-khabar hanste rahe aur ba-khabar rote rahe
Me khanay ki tauheen hai rindo ki hatak
Kam zarf ke haath me agar jaam diya jayai
Hum karain baat daleelon se to rud hoti hai
Is ke honton ki khamoshi bhi sanad hoti hai
Abhi mitti na khunki thi abhi paani na barsa tha
Magar bazm-e-anasir me tere hone ka charcha tha

Re: bohut totey howey haiN hum abhi dastuk nahi dey'Na!

nice sharing :)

Re: bohut totey howey haiN hum abhi dastuk nahi dey'Na!

buhat khoob

Re: bohut totey howey haiN hum abhi dastuk nahi dey'Na!

very nice