Bohat mudat howee hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Bohat mudat howee hai
Tumahari madhoor awaz soonay howay
Magar mari jaan
Jaab behi dil bay kaboo hota hai
Tumahari awaz kay liya
Tu nangay farash par
Kanch ke chooriyoon ko gra kar
Ghantoon soon ta rahta hoon

By Dilsay

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Re: Bohat mudat howee hai


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Originally posted by Dilsay: *
**Bahut muddat huwi hai
Tumhari madhurr awaaz sune huwe
Magar meri jaan
Jab bhi dil be-qabu hota hai
Tumhari aawaaz ke leye
Tu nange farsh per
Kaanch ki choreyoon ko gira kar
Ghatnoon sunta rehta hoon*

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Wah kya kehna, magar kya is behlaaway se dil-e-nashaad ko chain muyassar aajata hai Dilse ?

'Behlaawa'
Mein din raat
Tere milan ke sapnay dekhoon
Magar jab aankh khulay
Tu yeh hakeekat ashkaar ho
Ke sapnay dil ke behlaaway ke siwa
kuch nahee kuch bhi tu nahee...

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Re: Bohat mudat howee hai

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Bohat mudat howee hai
Tumahari madhoor awaz soonay howay
Magar mari jaan
Jaab behi dil bay kaboo hota hai
Tumahari awaz kay liya
Tu nangay farash par
Kanch ke chooriyoon ko gra kar
Ghantoon soon ta rahta hoon

By Dilsay
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its soo touchy....:) but, phir tu aaap ka sara time choorian kharidtey aur phir toorney mein hi lagta ho ga. heheh

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*Originally posted by Amarbail: *

Wah kya kehna, magar kya is behlaaway se dil-e-nashaad ko chain muyassar aajata hai Dilse ?

'Behlaawa'
Mein din raat
Tere milan ke sapnay dekhoon
Magar jab aankh khulay
Tu yeh hakeekat ashkaar ho
Ke sapnay dil ke behlaaway ke siwa
kuch nahee kuch bhi tu nahee...
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mohabat gar na mili hoo tu phir zindagi he ak behlawa hai... do you agree...

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*Originally posted by chodhry: *

its soo touchy....:) but, phir tu aaap ka sara time choorian kharidtey aur phir toorney mein hi lagta ho ga. heheh
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thanks haan asa he hai.....

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Re: Bohat mudat howee hai

nice:k:

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bohat khoob andaaz hey ‘recreation’ ka:k::)…bohat achi nazm hey Dilsay…thanx for sharing:)

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Re: Re: Bohat mudat howee hai

Thanks alot

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Amal jee thanks alot for your comments… but i did not understand what you mean by recreation can you please clear it…

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Bohat mudat howee hai
Tumahari madhoor awaz soonay howay

Wah, very nice...

Lakin kiya chooRion ki awaz or us ki awaz ik jesin hain?

Us ki chooRian to na toRain na, phone kaar lain:)

just kidding plz don't mind.

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Swera: *
Bohat mudat howee hai
Tumahari madhoor awaz soonay howay

Wah, very nice...

Lakin kiya chooRion ki awaz or us ki awaz ik jesin hain?

Us ki chooRian to na toRain na, phone kaar lain:)

just kidding plz don't mind.
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Phone har jagaha nahi hai na... baas itna he kah sakta hoon.... thanks for your advise anyway.....

Women Cursing
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bHut KhOoB:k:

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waqee bohut mudat howi hay chae paratta ko ....

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

i did not understand what you mean by recreation can you please clear it.....
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Recreation of the sound through chooriyaan :)

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Beautiful, bohat achi hai :k::k:

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buhat khoob nazm hay:-)

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ZABARDAST :k:

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *

Phone har jagaha nahi hai na... baas itna he kah sakta hoon.... thanks for your advise anyway.....
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Awwwww

:(

Ap ja kay hi sun ayaiN awaz un ki:(

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Thanks alot

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*Originally posted by Azad: *
waqee bohut mudat howi hay chae paratta ko ....
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Thanks alot Azad jee and nice to see you back