bohat chaha k bach niklaiN magaR sab kuch baha aa'ey

kaho wo chaand kaisa tha jidhaR sab kuch luta aa'ey jidhaR aankhaiN ganwa aa'ey kaha sey'laab jaisa tha bohut chaha k bach niklaiN magaR sab kuch baha aay ***kaho wo hijR kaisa tha******k*** ***abhi choo kaR usay daikha*** ***to tum nay kia bhala paaya*** ***kaha bas aag jaisa tha*** ***usay choo kar to apni rooh*** ***ye tann mann jala aa'ey*** kaho wo wisl kaisa tha tumhaiN jab choo lee'ya us nai to kia ehsaas jaaga tha kaha aik rastay jasa tha jidhaR say bas ye guzaRa tha makaa'n laykin bana aa'ey ***kaho wo chaand kaisa tha*** ***Falak say jo utaR aa'eya*** ***tumhaRi ankhon main basnay*** ***kaha wo khuwaab jaisa tha*** ***nahi taabeer koi us ki*** ***usay aik shab sula aa'ey*** kaho wo ishq kaisa tha bina sochay, bina samjhay bina paRkhay kia tum nai kaha titli kay rang jaisa bohut kacha anokha sa jabhi us ko bhula aa'ey ***kaho wo naam kaisa tha*** ***jisay sehra'oon aur *** ***chanchal hawaoon pay likha tum nay*** ***kaha bas mau'samooN jaisa*** ***jisay na jaanay kis ghaRi*** ***kisi ro main mita aa'ey***

Re: bohat chaha k bach niklaiN magaR sab kuch baha aa'ey

bohot khoob thx for sharing

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Awesome Dear!!!!
Wonderful Choice!!!
:)

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Superb.. Simply Awesome..

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its beautiful by fakhira
thx NJfor sharing

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Very nice poem Nikami Ji, thanks for shaing rung barangi style:~)

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thanks:) 4 liking

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thanks much :):blush:

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:blush: :slight_smile:

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shukria:)

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shukria gue-e-tasbeeh kabi kabhi rang badalnay ko dil karta :)

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Bahut aa’la … :k:

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Okay me back from the mountains after a hectic hiking/trekking trip:)
Very very nice choice as usual:)

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Wah,,bohat khusbsurat..

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Kya baat hey NiakmaiJi :k: Bohat achi nazm hey. Presentation is also that good. Barrey rang, shang bharey heiN aap ney :~)

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great! :k:

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wah ji kya rung barangi poem post ki hai jano nay :D
bohat hi nice :)
kaho woh ishq kasa hai bina sochay samjh kya tum nay :)

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BOhat Umda...
lekin woh Chaand kaisa bhi ho per apni Chando kay aagay maand hai. :p

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awww:blush:

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^ hey Allah me maR jaa :hoonh: