My eyes release blood,
my heart beats hate…
Running from my shadow
But trying to embrace
an illusion, a dream…
I’m bleeding to death..
I’m bleeding to death…
It’s a poem… im not that great at rhyming so yeah… my poems are usually in this format 
Re: Bleeding to death
good imagery, sabriya786.
yet, find that there is a halting end to the poem.
can the narrator expand on it?
best,
Dushwari
Re: Bleeding to death
dushwari tum tweetybird ki bhi shayari perha karo yaar
Re: Bleeding to death
sabriya 786 bohat acha hai