**ikk jot jaga k dil main hum
ikk rog laga k baith gaye
na uss ko ana tha jeevan main
kiun aas laga k baith gaye
her simt thi pheli wehshat si
her gaam pe kante kante thay
iss ruh main b so chaid huay
hum phir bhi gang khamosh rhe
wo kante uss ne palkon se chune
jo sadion se ruposh rhe
hamain apni dunya rehna hai
tum apni nagri jao ge
kuch der to tarrpain roain ge
phir khushbu sa mehkao ge
tasawur main ikk heola sa
iss dil main deep jalaye ga
kabhi saya sa,kabhi dhuan sa
so roop badal k aye ga
per ham samjhota ker baithe
jise jana tha wo chala gaya
so deep jala k ankhon main
ikk nanha jugnu bhi jala gaya…
**
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Very impressive and deep 
Qari ka Irtikaaz nah toranay walli khoubsurat nazam :cobra:
Shabash
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very nice
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Achi nazm hey.
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thanx every one.
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kon???wo jis se tum ne kaprre dhulwaye???han han aise he tareefain karo…dubara nai dhulwane 
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barri ho gai ustad-e-mohtaram jis ki kitaab se ye parrh k likha usay wapis ker dain…aglay safeh pe merne k 100 tareeqe likhe hain isliye tyan 
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Kabhi kabhar hum intellectual mood main hotay hain :cobra:
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han kabhi kabhar he ye shughal theek rehta hai
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Shazia aap ki likhi hoi nazm bohat achi hai :k:
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m honoured g,thanx.
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Very Nice Sh@zia..
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thanx Aryan…kitna cute hath hai,mujhe ap ka apna lag rha hai :@:
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very good
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very good
thanx g.