bikhray huwey haiN manzar...maiN jin maiN ghir gaya hooN

[Koyal]

**

aik nazm kho gaye hai
duniya ki wosato’on maiN
kuch lafz is ke gum haiN
neelay samandaron maiN
kuch harf mit gaye haiN
mo’sam ki barishon maiN
is ka koi kinaya
badlon ne le liya hai
hanso’n ki dhajh maiN is ka
ahang kho gaya hai
unwa’an, ruftagan ke
khawabon main jagta hai
uljhi hoye hain rahaiN
main jin pe chal raha hooN
bikhray howay hain manzar
main jin main ghir gaya hooN
is munatshir jahan maiN
aik nazam dhondhta hooN
**

[ullujii]

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

**

aik nazm kho gaye hai
duniya ki wosato’on maiN
kuch lafz is ke gum haiN
neelay samandaron maiN
kuch harf mit gaye haiN
mo’sam ki barishon maiN
is ka koi kinaya
badlon ne le liya hai
hanso’n ki dhajh maiN is ka
ahang kho gaya hai
unwa’an, ruftagan ke
khawabon main jagta hai
uljhi hoye hain rahaiN
main jin pe chal raha hooN
bikhray howay hain manzar
main jin main ghir gaya hooN
is munatshir jahan maiN
aik nazam dhondhta hooN
**

bhoot khoob

[WiseGuy]

Re: bikhray huwey haiN manzar...maiN jin maiN ghir gaya hooN

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

*

aik nazm kho gaye hai
duniya ki wosato'on maiN
kuch lafz is ke gum haiN
neelay samandaron maiN
kuch harf mit gaye haiN
mo'sam ki barishon maiN
is ka koi kinaya
badlon ne le liya hai
hanso'n ki dhajh maiN is ka
ahang kho gaya hai
unwa'an, ruftagan ke
khawabon main jagta hai
uljhi hoye hain rahaiN
main jin pe chal raha hooN
bikhray howay hain manzar
main jin main ghir gaya hooN
is munatshir jahan maiN
aik nazam dhondhta hooN
**
[/QUOTE]

Bohat khoob, Wah kia kehnay :)

[ullujii]

Bay Maani batoon say apna jee Gudlati hai
*Tu ik seedi se larki hai *
tu Qu apnay ap co ulta phen kar phirti rehti hai
Teray murjhay hontoon par
Tari khawhish par
Ahistaa Ahista Bhaar ati hai
ik Aan Dekha khoof ke Dayan
Tari Aankh main Daar ati hai
Din de dhoop main tu qu apni
Aankhin milti Rehti hai
*Tu ik Seedi larki hai *
tu qu apnay aap co ulta phen kar phirti rehti hai

sorry ya nazam adhi hai.. puree nahin likha sakta. qu k is k aggay kuch theek nahin likha :)

[Philanthrope]

Wah :k:

[chand_chehra]

Nice :k:

[Dragon_King]

buhat khoob :k:

[weteyes82]

*aik nazm kho gaye hai
duniya ki wosato'on maiN
kuch lafz is ke gum haiN
neelay samandaron maiN
kuch harf mit gaye haiN
mo'sam ki barishon maiN
is ka koi kinaya
badlon ne le liya hai
hanso'n ki dhajh maiN is ka
ahang kho gaya hai
unwa'an, ruftagan ke
khawabon main jagta hai
uljhi hoye hain rahaiN
main jin pe chal raha hooN
bikhray howay hain manzar
main jin main ghir gaya hooN
is munatshir jahan maiN
aik nazam dhondhta hooN *

well beautiful :)
whos the poet?

[Amal]

Re: bikhray huwey haiN manzar…maiN jin maiN ghir gaya hooN

*Originally posted by Koyal: *
**

aik nazm kho gaye hai
duniya ki wosato’on maiN
kuch lafz is ke gum haiN
neelay samandaron maiN
kuch harf mit gaye haiN
mo’sam ki barishon maiN
is ka koi kinaya
badlon ne le liya hai
hanso’n ki dhajh maiN is ka
ahang kho gaya hai
unwa’an, ruftagan ke
khawabon main jagta hai
uljhi hoye hain rahaiN
main jin pe chal raha hooN
bikhray howay hain manzar
main jin main ghir gaya hooN
is munatshir jahan maiN
aik nazam dhondhta hooN
**

Amazing stuff Koyal:k:…intehaai shaandaar nazm hey. Great selection:k:…thanx for sharing

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: bikhray huwey haiN manzar...maiN jin maiN ghir gaya hooN

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Koyal: *

*

aik nazm kho gaye hai
duniya ki wosato'on maiN
kuch lafz is ke gum haiN
neelay samandaron maiN
kuch harf mit gaye haiN
mo'sam ki barishon maiN
is ka koi kinaya
badlon ne le liya hai
hanso'n ki dhajh maiN is ka
ahang kho gaya hai
unwa'an, ruftagan ke
khawabon main jagta hai
uljhi hoye hain rahaiN
main jin pe chal raha hooN
bikhray howay hain manzar
main jin main ghir gaya hooN
is munatshir jahan maiN
aik nazam dhondhta hooN
**
[/QUOTE]

boht achee poem hei koyal jee:)

[Capricorn]

Re: bikhray huwey haiN manzar…maiN jin maiN ghir gaya hooN

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

**

aik nazm kho gaye hai
duniya ki wosato’on maiN
kuch lafz is ke gum haiN
neelay samandaron maiN
kuch harf mit gaye haiN
mo’sam ki barishon maiN
is ka koi kinaya
badlon ne le liya hai
hanso’n ki dhajh maiN is ka
ahang kho gaya hai
unwa’an, ruftagan ke
khawabon main jagta hai
uljhi hoye hain rahaiN
main jin pe chal raha hooN
bikhray howay hain manzar
main jin main ghir gaya hooN
is munatshir jahan maiN
aik nazam dhondhta hooN
**

:k:

[nikii]

bhut khoob :k:

[Dr.Sahiba]

boohat beautiful poem hay.acha laga perh ker.

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by ullujii: *
Bay Maani batoon say apna jee Gudlati hai
**Tu ik seedi se larki hai **
tu Qu apnay ap co ulta phen kar phirti rehti hai
Teray murjhay hontoon par
Tari khawhish par
Ahistaa Ahista Bhaar ati hai
ik Aan Dekha khoof ke Dayan
Tari Aankh main Daar ati hai
Din de dhoop main tu qu apni
Aankhin milti Rehti hai
**Tu ik Seedi larki hai **
tu qu apnay aap co ulta phen kar phirti rehti hai

sorry ya nazam adhi hai.. puree nahin likha sakta. qu k is k aggay kuch theek nahin likha

:k:

but ye seedi larki kon hia yahan…
wo be aj k zamanay maiN..

[Koyal]

Re: Re: bikhray huwey haiN manzar…maiN jin maiN ghir gaya hooN

*Originally posted by Amal: *

Amazing stuff Koyal:k:…intehaai shaandaar nazm hey. Great selection:k:…thanx for sharing

shukria shukria ap ko apni furstoon main se fursat mili..jo ap nachez k selection ki daa’d dainay aiey ..
selection tu kher achi kia honi ap ka zoaq acah jo ap ko ye achi lagi ..

[Koyal]

thanks Nikki ....Pharm...C_c ..Dk...eyes82..capri..dr sahiba..and masoom ji..:)

[ullujii]

*Originally posted by Koyal: *

:k:

but ye seedi larki kon hia yahan…
wo be aj k zamanay maiN..

bata don keya us ka naam ?

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by ullujii: *

bata don keya us ka naam ?

haan haan bolo bolo..chup keon …

[_Passionate]

great choice…:k:

[Koyal]

*Originally posted by &Passionate: *
great choice…:k:

thanks Pasoo bibi..