Bikhar rhi hay mri zaat usay kehnay

sanadubai · October 3, 2009, 4:06pm

i knw yh phlay b kisi nay post ki hogi..bt i just lv dat poetry isiliy mazrat k sath ak bar pir with decor!!!

terray_naam · October 3, 2009, 4:40pm

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Bohat ahla

system · October 3, 2009, 4:44pm

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bohat alaa

sanadubai · October 3, 2009, 6:11pm

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thnx:flower2:

babri · October 3, 2009, 7:13pm

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zabardest.

saqijani · October 3, 2009, 7:47pm

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bohot he aala.....nihayat khoobsoorat

Aryaan · October 4, 2009, 12:59am

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Good One Sana..:k:

EyEsOnSkY · October 4, 2009, 9:19am

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nice sharing

sanadubai · October 4, 2009, 12:15pm

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thnx for liking it:@:

KKF · October 4, 2009, 12:19pm

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**wow! wow!! wow!!!

kia zabardast kalaam bheja ahai...kahiiN jawaab meN yeh na aaye k:

kahnaa!

ik deevaanaa terii yaad meN aaheN bhartaa hai
likh kar teraa nama zameeN par usko sajde karta hai

subHaan Allah...bahooot umda kalaam ... thankoo for sharing :)**

sanadubai · October 4, 2009, 12:25pm

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KKF · October 4, 2009, 12:27pm

hey!!!1 r y speechless OR mismerixed? hehe

sanadubai · October 4, 2009, 12:40pm

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pata nii:cb:

system · October 4, 2009, 1:19pm

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good one.

sanadubai · October 4, 2009, 1:23pm

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Shazia_Arif · October 4, 2009, 2:00pm

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v nice sana, i m new here so dont knw pehle b kisi ne post ki hai. than 4 sharin "now".

redidentity · October 4, 2009, 2:40pm

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this is so beautiful..

sanadubai · October 16, 2009, 7:03am

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Muhammad_Adeel · October 16, 2009, 7:31pm

nice sharing :k:

diwana · October 18, 2009, 5:31am

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Nice poetry! Thanks. Not been here in a long time.

However the last part should have said:

Main jeet uske Naam Kar Raha Hoon Aaj
Main Maanta Hoon Apni Haar Usay kehna

What I meant is that you don't give haar and jeet both to the loved one.
You give jeet and you accept haar. This gives a better message. :-)

*Bikhar rhi hay mri zaat usay kehnay*