bhool joau mujhe ..

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 13, 2006, 4:29pm

*

wo tu yun tha k hum
apnii apnii zarorat kii khatir milayy
wo tu yun tha k barhte gaye silsilayy
warna yun haii k hum
ajnabii kal bhii thayy
ajnabii aaj bhii hien
har Qasm toor du
sub ziddien choor du
aur agr yun na tha tu yun hii soch lu
tum ne iQraar hii kub kia tha k mae
tum se mansoob hoon
tum ne israar hii kub kia tha k tum
yaad aaou mujhe
bhool joau mujhe …

Mohsin NaQvi*

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 13, 2006, 6:49pm

Re: bhool joau mujhe ..

Buhat achi poem hay HH, jab bhi parho acha lagta hay but

NikamiJano · August 13, 2006, 10:51pm

Re: bhool joau mujhe ..

warna yun haii k hum
ajnabii kal bhii thayy
ajnabii aaj bhii hien

nice on Hh :)

ghazal_kisi_ke · August 13, 2006, 10:57pm

Re: bhool joau mujhe ..

bohut umda! :k:

Amal · August 13, 2006, 11:09pm

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Lovely piece HeArT HaCKeR :k: MeiN ney pehli baar parrhi aur andaaza laga raha tha ke kis ko ho sakti hey, Parvin Shakir ki lag rahi thi lekin andaaza bilkul ghalat nikla…tame, tame ki baat hey

Shab-e-Hijar · August 13, 2006, 11:09pm

Re: bhool joau mujhe ..

very nice :k:

mahamkhan · August 14, 2006, 11:05am

Re: bhool joau mujhe ..

Nice one!

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 14, 2006, 5:27pm

Re: bhool joau mujhe ..

thanks to everyone :)

kaleemhk · August 15, 2006, 9:50am

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Bohat alla janab :))

Precious_Khan · August 15, 2006, 11:14am

Re: bhool joau mujhe ..

buhat Khoob

Berhi_Bee · August 15, 2006, 2:52pm

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zabardesttttt!!!:)
thx 4 sharing

WiseGuy · August 15, 2006, 3:26pm

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HHuuu bohat khoob, thank you for sharing

HeArT_HaCKeR · August 15, 2006, 8:06pm

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thank you :)

Muslim_girl_1 · August 16, 2006, 5:41pm

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bohat hi achi poem share ki aap nae…:k:

Sannan · August 17, 2006, 9:38am

Re: bhool joau mujhe ..

buhat khubsurat nazam .... mohsin naqvi's nazam always attract me a lot ........ thanks for sharing such a nice stuff.....keep sharing