bheerr main ikk ajnabi ka samna acha laga sab se chup k wo kisi ka dekhna acha laga
surmai ankhon k neeche phool se khilne lage kehte kehte kuch kisi ka sochna acha laga
baat to kuch bhi nhi thi,lekin us ka ek dam hath ko honton pe rakh k rokna acha laga
chaiye main cheeni milana uss gharri bhaya bohat zer-e-lab wo muskurata shukriah acha laga
dil main kitne ehed bandhe thay bhulane k usay wo mila to sab iraday torrna acha laga
uss ada-e-jaa(n) ko AMJAD main bura kese kahun jab bhi aya samne wo be wafa acha laga…
fara
February 10, 2011, 2:21pm
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Abb tu mujhay sadqay jana he parray ga... tum nay meray fav shair ki behtren ghazal post ki hay... jeeti raho, khush rahoo
Amal
February 10, 2011, 2:26pm
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bheerr main ikk ajnabi ka samna acha laga
sab se chup k wo kisi ka dekhna acha laga
surmai ankhon k neeche phool se khilne lage
kehte kehte kuch kisi ka sochna acha laga
baat to kuch bhi nhi thi,lekin us ka ek dam
hath ko honton pe rakh k rokna acha laga
chaiye main cheeni milana uss gharri bhaya bohat
zer-e-lab wo muskurata shukriah acha laga
dil main kitne ehed bandhe thay bhulane k usay
wo mila to sab iraday torrna acha laga
uss ada-e-jaa(n) ko AMJAD main bura kese kahun
jab bhi aya samne wo be wafa acha laga...
Always a treat to read...such a sweet and cute ghazal :)
Re: BhEeRr MaIn Ik AjNaBi
mene kaha na main ap ki muhabbat ki wese he aseer ho gai isliye ab sadkay janay ka khyal dil se nikaal dain..haeeeeeeeeeeeee barri thandd hai wahan
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Always a treat to read...such a sweet and cute ghazal :)
agreed:)
UZ
February 10, 2011, 4:49pm
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Very nice ghazal Shazia romantic and sad ikthay :k: Loved it
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han…i was lil serious to read it
Re: BhEeRr MaIn Ik AjNaBi
bheerr main ikk ajnabi ka samna acha laga sab se chup k wo kisi ka dekhna acha laga
surmai ankhon k neeche phool se khilne lage kehte kehte kuch kisi ka sochna acha laga
baat to kuch bhi nhi thi,lekin us ka ek dam hath ko honton pe rakh k rokna acha laga
chaiye main cheeni milana uss gharri bhaya bohat zer-e-lab wo muskurata shukriah acha laga
dil main kitne ehed bandhe thay bhulane k usay wo mila to sab iraday torrna acha laga
uss ada-e-jaa(n) ko AMJAD main bura kese kahun jab bhi aya samne wo be wafa acha laga…
kon tha yeh ajnabi
BTW
Nice very nice :k:
Re: BhEeRr MaIn Ik AjNaBi
kon tha yeh ajnabi
BTW
Nice very nice :k:
mat shak karo apa pe waleedu baba
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burqey ka issi liye hukm hay
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kitni “pakeeza” baat ki
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Nice 0ne :)
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kitni "pakeeza" baat ki :@:
Really :-d
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Nice 0ne :)
thanx g.
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Really :-d
han :@:
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baba ko nhe btayegi to kis ko btayegi ap phr
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chotte bhai ho isliye chotte he rho
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theek hai nhe puchta
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bht he khob
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bht he khob
amjad sahab hamesha he khob likhtay
thanks for sharing
thanx g.
well thanx for liking 
jo b tha tumhain kiun bataon 
thanx for likin 
or bachon wala baba he banay rho..khabar dar agar tum se milne ko dil kerta hai baba ban-ne ki koshish ki