Bheer mein ek ajnabi.................

Dr.Sahiba · March 24, 2003, 7:53pm

bheeR maeN ik ajnabi kaa saamna achaa lagaa
sab say chup kar wuh kisi kaa daekhna achaa lagaa
surmai AaNkhooN kay neechay phool say khilnay lagay
kehtay kehtay kuch kisi kaa sochnaa achaa lagaa
baat to kuch bhi naheeN thi, laiken uss kaa aek damm
haath ko hoNtooN peh rakh kar roknaa achaa lagaa
chaa-ae maeN cheeni milaana uss ghaRi bhaayaa bahut
zer-e lab woh muskarata “shukriyaa” achaa lagaa
dil maeN kitnay ehd baaNdhay thay bhulaanay kay usay
woh milaa to sab iraaday toRnaa achaa lagaa
bay-iraada lams ki woh sansani piyaari lagi
kam tawajjuh AaNkh kaa woh daekhna achaa lagaa
neem shab ki khaamushi maeN, bheegati saRkooN peh kal
taeri yaadooN kay jalo maeN ghoomnaa achaa lagaa
uss udu-ay jaaN ko ~AMJAD~ maiN buraa kaisay kahooN
jab bhi Aayaa samnay woh bay-wafaa achaa lagaa

ameen · March 24, 2003, 8:05pm

Re: Bheer mein ek ajnabi.................

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dr. Sahiba: *
bheeR maeN ik ajnabi kaa saamna achaa lagaa
sab say chup kar wuh kisi kaa daekhna achaa lagaa
surmai AaNkhooN kay neechay phool say khilnay lagay
kehtay kehtay kuch kisi kaa sochnaa achaa lagaa
baat to kuch bhi naheeN thi, laiken uss kaa aek damm
haath ko hoNtooN peh rakh kar roknaa achaa lagaa
chaa-ae maeN cheeni milaana uss ghaRi bhaayaa bahut
zer-e lab woh muskarata "shukriyaa" achaa lagaa
dil maeN kitnay ehd baaNdhay thay bhulaanay kay usay
woh milaa to sab iraaday toRnaa achaa lagaa
bay-iraada lams ki woh sansani piyaari lagi
kam tawajjuh AaNkh kaa woh daekhna achaa lagaa
neem shab ki khaamushi maeN, bheegati saRkooN peh kal
taeri yaadooN kay jalo maeN ghoomnaa achaa lagaa
uss udu-ay jaaN ko ~AMJAD~ maiN buraa kaisay kahooN
jab bhi Aayaa samnay woh bay-wafaa achaa lagaa
[/QUOTE]

wah. buhat he khoobsurat. nice. thanx 4 sharing.

system · March 24, 2003, 8:35pm

Wah :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 24, 2003, 8:39pm

very nice:k::k:

Lamhay · March 25, 2003, 4:37am

wah bahut khoob dr sahiba!

Philanthrope · March 25, 2003, 8:12am

Kia khoobsorat jazbaat hain.. Beautiful...
Thanks Doctor Sahiba..

Azad · March 25, 2003, 12:46pm

:k:

Dr.Sahiba · March 25, 2003, 1:46pm

app sub ka boohat boohat shukria.

Azad · March 25, 2003, 1:56pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Dr. Sahiba: *
app sub ka boohat boohat shukria.
[/QUOTE]

Shukira theek hay .. iss say apnayt ka ihsaas hota hay

aadhoorighazal · March 25, 2003, 1:57pm

its awesome.............thanks Dr.

ayman · March 25, 2003, 2:20pm

wah kya baat hai… bohot khoob :k:

shukria for sharing

Azad · March 25, 2003, 2:25pm

bhaii ayman aap ke kitnay nicks hain … aap nay to aadhoori ko bhi maat day dii good work keep it up :k:

_MuNiYa · March 25, 2003, 3:22pm

[QUOTE]
uss udu-ay jaaN ko ~AMJAD~ maiN buraa kaisay kahooN
[/QUOTE]

Awesome..

Dilsay · March 25, 2003, 3:36pm

Masha Allah....

ayman · March 25, 2003, 4:40pm

Azad bhai mujhe aap ki baat ki samajh nahi aye.. meray paas toh sirf aik hee nick hai aur aap kaun si ‘maat’ ki baat kar rahayn hayn aap???

X_Communist · March 25, 2003, 6:13pm

Very Sweet Doctah.

system · March 25, 2003, 7:13pm

Beautiful, one of my fav… :k::k:

ullujii · March 25, 2003, 7:46pm

bohoot khoob :k:

Mehvar · March 26, 2003, 2:01am

Re: Bheer mein ek ajnabi…

*Originally posted by Dr. Sahiba: *
bheeR maeN ik ajnabi kaa saamna achaa lagaa
sab say chup kar wuh kisi kaa daekhna achaa lagaa
surmai AaNkhooN kay neechay phool say khilnay lagay
kehtay kehtay kuch kisi kaa sochnaa achaa lagaa
baat to kuch bhi naheeN thi, laiken uss kaa aek damm
haath ko hoNtooN peh rakh kar roknaa achaa lagaa
chaa-ae maeN cheeni milaana uss ghaRi bhaayaa bahut
zer-e lab woh muskarata “shukriyaa” achaa lagaa
dil maeN kitnay ehd baaNdhay thay bhulaanay kay usay
woh milaa to sab iraaday toRnaa achaa lagaa
bay-iraada lams ki woh sansani piyaari lagi
kam tawajjuh AaNkh kaa woh daekhna achaa lagaa
neem shab ki khaamushi maeN, bheegati saRkooN peh kal
taeri yaadooN kay jalo maeN ghoomnaa achaa lagaa
uss udu-ay jaaN ko ~AMJAD~ maiN buraa kaisay kahooN
jab bhi Aayaa samnay woh bay-wafaa achaa lagaa

i love this poem…its shoooooooooo shweet:blush:

Dr.Sahiba · March 26, 2003, 8:01am

thanks ALLLLLLLLLLLLLL OF u again.