Bheegi Palkon main Bheegh'ta hay Akss Tera

Sir e shaam! Jaam main tayrta hinaa’i rang
Her su shafaq rang kay daree’chay kholay

Sargo’shiyaan karti jay hay phir mast hawa
Pass hi jaisay --------Tu! dheeray say bolay

Takhayol khwab sa ghehra our mussal’sal
Sarak’ti shaam barrh kar zulf e shab kholay

Raqss khwabida taroon ka pich’lay pehir
Band, penhaan ashkoon kay phir say kholay

Bheegi palkon main bheegh’ta hay Akss tera
Aankh say uther kar bheegh’tay lehjay main bolay

Nahi iss veera’nay main koi ** Azad¬ **dooja
Junoon kay sirha’nay aaj tu jee bhar kay roo-lay

Adab Arz
(Azad)

Bolay
Kholay
Rolay

in ka istimaal nahin hua >>>>Sholay , holay, dolay ......

kafi umda koshish hai azad ji !

nice :)

Truely nice...

Nice...
keep it up :-)

wah. zabardast and really nice.

bohat khoob :k:

bohat khoobsurut hai :k::k:
Thanx 4 sharing :slight_smile:

wah beautiful:k::k:

:k:

Maza nahin aya :p
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Just kidding na,
Bohat achi hai :)

bohat khoob..love da last 2 shairz :)

thank you all :)

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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
Bolay
Kholay
Rolay

in ka istimaal nahin hua >>>>Sholay , holay, dolay ......

kafi umda koshish hai azad ji !
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well woh to jab aap saat main hon to sholay ko holay say chu kar man dolay ga na ;)

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*Originally posted by WiseGuy: *
nice :)
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thanks .... aaj aap kii batisee nazar nahi aa rahay .... ghar bhool aay hain kia? ;)

Nice effort...

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*Originally posted by Dilsay: *
Truely nice...
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Azad kay nice honay main aap ko shaq hi koi???

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*Originally posted by chand_chehra: *
Nice...
keep it up :-)
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k .. thanks :)

lagta hay aik aap hi dilwali hain .. yeh baqi to dahi bhalay par guzara kar rahay hain :wink:

Hey kali …1K mubarak ho :slight_smile: