Bewafa'ee uski mita ke aaya hoon....

Sehrysh · May 10, 2012, 3:10pm

Bewafa’ee uski mita ke aaya hoon
Khat uski paani me baha kar aaya hoon
Ko’ee paRh na le us bewafa ki yaadon ko
Is liyay paani mein bhi aag laga kar aaya hoon*

muqawwee123 · May 10, 2012, 3:13pm

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Nice one. Reminds me this one:

waleedhbk · May 10, 2012, 3:52pm

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*Is liyay paani mein bhi aag laga kar aaya hoon

*

KKF · May 10, 2012, 4:04pm

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a small typo correction.

ek shaa'ir ek taraf to 'paanii meN aag lagaane' ke da've kartaa hai aur dusrii jaanib ek duusraa shaa'ir un Khutoot ko zaanoo meN rakh kar taareek, bijli ke taRaakoN aur barq kii chundhiyaa denii waali shab meN intizaar kartaa hai...kia moHabbat ke aise do tazaad rang bhii hote haiN? she'r mulaaHizah farmaaiye:

udhar bijlii ke paiham kaundne se door tak raushan
idhar Khat ek zaanoo par dharaa, aaKHir kab aaoge?

mere vaalid-e-marHoom kii Ghazal kaa ek she'r

muqawwee123 · May 10, 2012, 4:07pm

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KKF uamla jab ruswai tak aa jae to ya to khat jala diye jaate hain, ya baha diye jate hain

Khair ab to ye purani baaten hogai.. ab kahan khat likhne wale aur kahan khat sanbhalne wale :hinna:

UZ · May 10, 2012, 4:18pm

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Nice

KKF · May 10, 2012, 4:28pm

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achchhaa Khayaal pesh kiyaa magar ab email ko sambhaalna to aur bhii mushkil ho gayaa…pahle Khat jalaayaa aur faariGh ho gaye…ab to miTaate jaao email aur save karte jaao…dekhaa nahiiN memo scandal meN Haqqanii saaHib abhii tak kaise phaNse huye haiN … lol

enter10 · May 10, 2012, 8:18pm

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Bohat Khoob

LP · May 10, 2012, 11:19pm

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Nice sehreysh:k:
I didn’t know you are into poetry too …keep it up

Sannan · May 11, 2012, 4:53am

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