bete hoee lamhay mein

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 21, 2002, 12:09am

hi,
there is a nice poem of Parveen Saker(if i spell her name wrong then i am sorry) for u guys:)

tum se kaenat ka husan qaim hai
bete lamhoon mein us ne
mere haath thahm ker kaha thaa
aur aaj us ke palat jane se
mujhe yaad aa raha hai ke
yeh kehte hoee aus ke aankhain
johkee hoee thee:teary3:

hope u’ll like it:)

_Passionate · November 21, 2002, 12:27am

nice...:(

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 21, 2002, 12:43am

thanks:)

Lamhay · November 21, 2002, 12:46am

perveen shakir gr8 poet!

Gr8 choice ghazal thanks 4 sharing!

Jaan_Lewaa · November 21, 2002, 3:43am

bhut khoob:k:

_Masoom_Muskaan · November 21, 2002, 10:09am

boht achei :)

sleeping_beauty_1 · November 21, 2002, 11:45am

very nice! :k:

Pramod · November 21, 2002, 6:49pm

bahot khub.
thanks for sharing.

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 21, 2002, 7:56pm

thanks a lot:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 21, 2002, 8:00pm

yes she is my fav:)and thanks:flower2:

HeArT_HaCKeR · November 21, 2002, 9:12pm

bhooot achi hai :k:

nikii · November 21, 2002, 11:07pm

:k:
bhut khoob:)

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 22, 2002, 4:28am

thanks alot guys:)

arifnawaz1 · November 22, 2002, 9:52pm

Re: bete hoee lamhay mein

Bahut hi zabardast contribution hai… Dil ko choo lene wala
Per kya aap abhi tak dukhi hain GKK?

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 23, 2002, 12:30am

thanks arif:)
mein to pehle bhi ase he thee aur ab bhi hoon.pal do pal ke khusee se kia farq parta hai.

Capricorn · November 23, 2002, 1:29am

Re: bete hoee lamhay mein

Yeah I liked it. Strange ke mujhe yaad naheen aa rahee though mein ne parveen shakir kee sabkitabein parhe huee hain.
Lamhay she is not a poet but a poetess;p

ghazal_kisi_ke · November 24, 2002, 12:10am

thanks capricorn:)