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Muqaddar Kay Hawalay Karday*

Mujh ko dolee main bitha dar kay hawalay kar day
meri maan mujh ko muqaddar kay hawalay kar day

ab yeh ahsas k duniya main mera koi nahin
janay kab mujh ko samandar kay hawalay kar day

iss qabeelay sey naheen main kah jo apni larky
jung k khoof sey lashkar kay hawalay kar day

mujh se mil kar use mehsoos howa aisay
jaisay khudh ko koi pather kay hawalay kar day

ghomnay phirnay ka hal rakhti hay phir bhi titali
kis lie khudh ko gul-e-tar kay hawalay kar day

akailay kamray main paray rahnay sey bahtar ho ga
aye qamar khudh ko bharay ghar k hawlay kar day

Poet: Rihana Qamar
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Amjad Islam Amjad

Amjad Islam Amjad is one of the most popular poets of today Popularity is acquired through the God-gifted qualities that a personality possesses.

One thing which seemed common in Amjad Islam Amjad nazms, ghazals, dramas and columns was his desire to bring about good. "The common theme in his works is khair-i-kaseer. Amjad Islam Amjad doesn’t compromise with the unwanted forces, the exploitative forces. He had always spoken the truth no matter what.

He is performing many jobs at a time very well. He writes columns, translations, Dramas, Essays and do poetry. He thinks that when a person want to express his feelings he look for the ways. The method he find near and appropriate to is feelings he adopt it. That’s why he also express his feelings through all the ways.

the ghazal I’m posting is one of my most favorite ghazal. this ghazal brought me into the the poetry world. every time i ready it takes my breath away . i don’t think i need to say anything about its background. all i can say that this dude has put his soul in it..i wonder how can someone come up with awfully beautiful words

enjoy

jo utar ke ziinaa-e-shaam se terii chashm-e-Khush me.n samaa gaye
vahii jalate bujhate se mahar-o-maah mere baam-o-dar ko sajaa gaye

ye ajiib khel hai ishq kaa mai.n ne aap dekhaa ye mojezaa
vo jo lafz mere gumaa.N me.n the vo terii zubaa.N par aa gaye

vo jo giit tum ne sunaa nahii.n merii umr bhar kaa riyaaz thaa
mere dard kii thii daastaa.N jise tum ha.Nsii me.n u.Daa gaye

vo charaaG-e-jaa.N kabhii jis kii lau na kisii havaa se niguu.N hui
terii bevafaaaye ke vaasavasay usay chupake chupake bujhaa gaye

vo thaa chaa.Nd shaam-e-visaal kaa ke thaa ruup tere jamaal kaa
merii ruuh se merii aankh tak kisi raushanii me.n nahaa gaye

terii beruKhi ke dayaar mai main havaa ke saath havaa huaa
tere aa_iine kii talaash mai mere Khvaab cheharaa ga.Nvaa gaye

tere vaasavaaon ke fishar men teraa sharar-e-rang ujar gayaa
merii Khvaahisho.n ke Gubaar me.n mere maah-o-saal-e-vafaa gaye

vo ajeb phuul se lafz the tere hont jin se mahak uThe
mere dasht-e-Khvaab men duur tak koii baaG jaise lagaa gaye

merii umer se na simaT sake mere dil men itane savaal the
tere paas jitane javaab the terii ik nigaah me.n aa gaye

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Bhai Jaan AQ Discussion Two Days Se Chal Rahi Hai Neways Its Still Up To Judges :)

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deap oceans and Prince Ali never participated in the discussion so naturally I had to assume they were not aware of things that we discussed... I think that much is their right to know..

Remember, we are here to share good poetry and have some good time.... Perhaps, we will learn new things with the reminders as well.... :)

If you disagree with my decision, I do not mind as long as Amal overrides it...

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ya Allah is larkay ko ek din kaliye chain ki neend sula day :snooty:

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*Plz yaha par sirf ghazal post karien agar kesi ko koi query hay to wo other thread mai post kare *

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Asalam o Alikum All members mainey kabhi kisi competition main participate nahi kiya hai yeh first time hei ager kahin koi mistake hojaye to plz bateye gaa zaroor i hope k aap sub ko meri choice pasnad aye gee

First of All Something about my fav poet** AMJAD ISLAM AMJAD**
Introduction
Amjad Islam Amjad told us that He was born on 4th August 1944 and his parents belong to Sialkot and they migrated to Lahore in 1930. None of his family came to literature even none of his family was educated and none of his cousins took interest in studies, and still they sale spear parts in market. His work of writing and even being educated is a miracle. His father himself was not educated but he supported his son to study where ever he wanted.

How he came to take interest in writing
His neighbour Aqa Bedar Bakhat was running a college and he was only in his community who got books at home. Aqa never let his own sons to study those books because he was very conciuos about his books but he allowed Amjad Islam Amjad to study those books.
Another incident was, he was made Editor of Magazine during school life when he was in 9th class.
Amjad Islam Amjad took the names of Shafiq-u-Rehman, Ibne Safi and Mushtaq Yousafi , writers in urdu literature, whom writings developed a habbit of reading in him at young age. He also told that this habbit is very rare in new generation.
(Remember Mushtaq Ahmad Yousafi is a comic writer and Amjad Islam Amjad is sencond one who is admiring his work, before him within a month Khalid Masood , to whom i went few days back, told that he love Mushtaq Ahmad Yousafi)
He told that he is best saller of Pakistan and his books sold are only 3000 per year and there was a publisher in china which never published a book less than 250000 copies.
If you ask any book in UK liberaries in any language, they will provide you with in 21 days.

How he wrote his first poetry
He told that writing poetry was not a learnt process but it was innate but as it is human psychology to be inspired ,just like children who try to copy elders and they learn but when they grow up they start doing themselves.
He was also inspired by the poetry of magazine named Shamma, Chatan, etc
At that time Sharab (alcohol) was a hot topic of urdu poetry and he wrote about sharab, he still laugh when he read what was his fist verse

KHILTEY HAIN ARZOO KAY SITAREY SHARAB MAIN
MILTEY HAIN BEKASOON KO SAHARE SHARAB MAIN

And now my Fav GHAZAL.

bhii.D me.n ik ajanabii kaa saamanaa achchhaa lagaa

bhii.D me.n ik ajanabii kaa saamanaa achchhaa lagaa
sab se chup kar vo kisii kaa dekhanaa achchhaa lagaa

surma_ii aa.Nkho.n ke niiche phuul se khilane lage
kahate kahate kuchh kisii kaa sochanaa achchhaa lagaa

baat to kuchh bhii nahii.n thii lekin us kaa ek dam
haath ko ho.nTho.n pe rakh kar rokanaa achchhaa lagaa

chaay me.n chiinii milaanaa us gha.Dii bhaayaa bahut
zer-e lab vo muskuraataa shukriyaa achchhaa lagaa

dil me.n kitane ahad baa.Ndhe the bhulaane ke use
vo milaa to sab iraade to.Danaa achchhaa lagaa

beiraadaa lams kii vo san_sanii pyaarii lagii
kam tavajjo aa.Nkh kaa vo dekhanaa achchhaa lagaa

niim shab kii Khaamushii me.n bhiigatii sa.Dako.n pe kal
terii yaado.n ke jaalo me.n ghuumanaa achchhaa lagaa

us uduu-e-jaa.N ko 'Amjad' mai.n buraa kaise kahuu.N
jab bhii aayaa saamane vo bevafaa achchhaa lagaa

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ab k tajdeed-e-wafa ka nahi imkaaN jaana
yaad kya tujhko dilaaein tera paymaaN jaana

yunhi mosam ki ada daikh k yaad aaya hai
kis qadar jald badal jaatay hein insaaN jaana

zindagi teri ataa thi so tere naam ki hai
hum ne jaisi bhi basar ki tera ehsaaN jaana

*dil ye kehta hai k shaayad ho fasurda tu bhi
dil ki kya baat karein, dil to hai naadaaN jaana
*

awwal awwal ki muhabbat k nashay yaad to kar
be-piye bhi tera chehra tha gulistaaN jaana

aakhir aakhir to ye aalam hai k ab hosh nahi
rag-e-meena sulag uthi k rag-e-jaaN jaana

muddaton se yehi aalam, na tavaqqo na umeed
dil pukaaray hi chala jaata hai "jaana jaana"

hum bhi kya saada thay, hum ne bhi samajh rakha tha
gham-e-doraaN se juda hai Gham-e-jaana jaana

ab k kuch aesi saji mehfil-e-yaaraN jaana
sar-ba-zaanu hai koi sar-ba-girebaaN jaana

har koi apni hi awaaz se kaanp uthta hai
har koi apnay hi saaey se hiraasaN jaana

jis ko dekho wohi zanjeer-ba-pa lagata hai
shehr ka shehr hua daaKhil-e-zindaaN jaana

ab tera zikr bhi shaayad hi Gazal mein aaye
aur se aur hua dard ka unvaaN jaana

hum k roothi hui rut ko bhi mana lete thay
hum ne dekha hi na tha mosam-e-hijraaN jaana

hosh aaya to sabhii Khwaab thay reza reza
jaisay urtay huay auraaq-e-pareshaaN jaana

**FARAZ

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M NOt sleepy :p

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subah-e-sadiq mujhay matlob hai kis say mangon
tum to bholay ho chiraghon say bahel jaogay

IQBAL AZEEM

A poet who dos't need any intro. the name which already in great urdo poets and apart from poetry he has done remarkable services for educational institutes.

iqbal azeem born in 8th july 1913 at meerath U.P
grew up in lakhnow and oodh
graduated from lakhnow university in 1934

Iqbal Azeem has a very sarcastic style of expression and does
not seem as cynical as other poets. His prose does not tend to
attack the world as much as himself for his problems. Iqbal Azeem,
in his poetry, tends to claim a great deal of responsilbity for his
problems in life not throwing the blame to the rest of the world

mizraab
mizraab dar baab
lub kusha
nadeeda
chiragh-e-akhr-e-shab

are his ghazals books

he wrote some collections of naats also
and a book which contains the complete story of 7 founders of Pakistan

lot more to say abt this great poet but runnin out of time so finally postin his ghazal which i like most but still its not best of best

wo nazar sey door tu hain magar ye ajeeb surat-e haal hai
huma waqt paish-e nazar bhi hain, na firaaq hay na visaal hai

na wo hum say kum, na hum un say kum, wo udher khafa, hum idher khafa
na unhain humara khayyal hay, na humain demaagh-e sawal hai

yehi qurbatain, yehi fasley tu kholoos-e ishq ki jaan hain
kabhi gard-e ranj-o malaal hay, kabhi fikr-e pursish-e haal hai

ye tumhaari talkh nawaiyaan koi aur seh k dikha tu day
ye jo tum main mujh main nibah hay, merey hoslay ka kamal hai

mujhay is ka koi bhi ghum nahi k kisi nay mujh sey wafa na ki
main kisi k kaam na aa saka mujhe sirf is ka malal hai

jo guzar rahi hay guzaar do, na bura kaho, na gila karo
jo tumhara haal hay dostoon, wohi saarey shehr ka haal hai

main kahan sey laoon wo roshni jo kisi k shehr main lut gayi
wo kisi ka shehr bhi lut gaya, mujhe is ka aur malaal hai

terey mashwarey k kholoos per mujhe tark-e ishq qobool hai
magar aik baat hay hum-nasheen, meri zindagi ka sawaal hai

iqbal azeem

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is vaqt to yuu.N lagataa hai ab kuchh bhii nahii.n hai
mahataab na suuraj na a.Ndheraa na saveraa
aa.Nkho.n ke dariiche me.n kisii husn kii jhalakan
aur dil kii panaaho.n me.n kisii dard kaa Deraa
mumkin hai ko_ii vaham ho mumkin hai sunaa ho
galiyo.n me.n kisii chaap kaa ek aaKhirii pheraa
shaaKho.n me.n Khayaalo.n ke ghane pe.D kii shaayad
ab aake karegaa na ko_ii Khvaab baseraa
ik bair na ik mahar na ik rabt na rishtaa
teraa ko_ii apanaa na paraayaa ko_ii meraa
maanaa ki ye sun-saan gha.Dii saKht ba.Dii hai
lekin mere dil ye to faqat ek gha.dii hai
himmat karo jiine ko abhii umr pa.Dii hai


by **Faiz Ahmed Faiz

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Dead Soul Bhai U vl gEt Really kool Marks :)

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Poet:
Naam: Syed Ahmed Shah
Takhallus: Faraz

Introduction of the Poet:
Faraz ke ta'aruf k liye unhin ka ek she'r:
MaiN tera naam na looN phir bhee log pehchaneiN
Ke aap apna ta'aruf hawaa bahaar kii hai

Ghazal:

BarsoN ke baad dekhaa ik shakhs dil-rubaa saa

BarsoN ke baad dekhaa ik shakhs dil-rubaa saa
Ab zahan meiN nahiN hai par naam thaa bhalaa saa

Abruu khinche khinche se aankheiN jhukii jhukii sii
Baate.n rukii rukii sii lehjaa thakaa thakaa saa

Alfaaz the ke jugnuu aavaaz ke safar meiN
Ban jaaye jangaloN meiN jis tarah raastaa saa

KhwaaboN meiN khwaab uss ke yaadoN meiN yaad us kii
NeendoN meiN ghul gayaa ho jaise ke rat-jagaa saa

Pehle bhee log aaye kitne hii zindagii meiN
Woh har tarah se lakin auroN se thaa judaa saa

Aglii muhabbatoN ne vo naa-muraadiyaaN deeN
Taazaa rafaaqatoN se dil thaa daraa daraa saa

Kuchh yeh ke muddatoN se ham bhee nahiN the roye
Kuchh zehar meiN bujhaa thaa ehbaab kaa dilaasaa

Phir yuuN huaa ke saavan aankhoN meiN aa base the
Phir yuu.N huaa ke jaise dil bhee thaa aablaa saa

Ab sach kaheiN to yaaro ham ko khabar nahiN thii
Ban jaaye gaa qayaamat ik vaaqi'aa zaraa saa

Tevar the berukhii ke andaaz dostii ke
Woh ajnabii thaa lekin lagtaa thaa aashnaa saa

Ham dasht the ke dariyaa ham zehar the ke amrat
Naahaq thaa zo'm ham ko jab woh nahiN thaa pyaasaa

Ham ne bhee uss ko dekhaa kal shaam ittefaaqan
Apnaa bhee haal hai ab logo 'Faraz' kaa saa

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ANKH GAR HOTI TO QATRAY MAIN SAMANDAR DEKHTA.......

** Har tamashai faqat sahil se manzar dekhta..
Kon daryaa ko ulat-taa , kon gohaar dekhta.

                                       Wo to duyna ko meri dewangi khush aa gaee
                                       Tere hathon mea wagarna pehla pathar dekhta.

                                       Dobnay wala tha aur sahil peh chehron ka hujoom
                                       Pal ki muhlat thi mai kis ko ankh bhar keh dekhta.

                                       Ankh mai ansoo jaray thay, par sadaa tuj ko na di
                                       Is tawaqo par keh shayad tu palat kar dekhta.

                                       Zindagi phaili huee thi shaam e e hijraan ki tarah
                                       Kis mai itna  hosla tha kon jee kar dekhta.

                                       Meri qismat ki lakeerain mere hathon main na thin
                                       Tere mathay par koee mera muqadar dekhta.

                                       Tu bhi dil ko ik lahu ki boond samjha hai faraz
                                       Ankh gar hoti to qatray mai samandar dekhta.**

                                            ** AHMED FARAZ**

**Ahmed Faraz (Urdu: احمد فراز) (January 14, 1931 in Nowshera(Pakistan) is considered one of the greatest modern Urdu poets of the last century and greatest living Urdu poet of present times. Faraz is his 'takhallus', whereas his real name is Syed Ahmed Shah.

Faraz, who has been compared with Mohammad Iqbal and Faiz Ahmed Faiz, holds a unique position as one of the best poets of current times, with a fine but simplistic style of writing, even common people can easily understand and identify with. Ethnically a Pashto-speaking Pashtun, Ahmed Faraz learned and studied Persian and Urdu at the Peshawar University where he taught these subjects later.**

        **Some famous Ghazals & Nazms of Ahmed Faraz**

**-ab ke ham bichhre to shaayad kabhi Khaabon men milen

-ab ke tajdid-e-vafaa kaa nahin imkaan jaanaan

-abr-e-bahaar ab ke bhii barsaa pare pare

-dil giraftaa hi sahi bazm sajaa li jaaye

-ham to yun Khush the ke ek taar gariibaan men hai

-har koi dil ki hatheli pe hai sehraa rakhe

-jo bhii dukh yaad na tha yaad aayaa

-kathin hai raahguzar thori duur saath chalo

-Khud-kushii

-kyaa aise kam-sukhan se ko'ii guftaguu kare

-main ke phir dasht-e-rafaaqat kaa safar kar aayaa

-phir usii raahguzar par shaayad

-ranjish hi sahi dil hi dukhaane ke liye aa

-silsile tor gayaa vo sabhi jaate jaate

-sunaa hai log use aankh bhar ke dekhte hain

-terii baaten hii sunaane aaye

-teri yaadon kaa vo aalaam nahin hai

-tujhse bicchar ke ham bhi muqaddar ke ho gaye

-usne sukuut-e-shab men bhi apnaa payaam rakh diyaa**

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:salam:

I Had Marked Many Ghazals to Place Under This Section but I was so Confused AmOng All of Dem.. Really Hard to Select the Favourite One..

Still Here is My Contribution.. My Most Favourite Ghazal,

MIRZA MUHAMMAD ASADULLAH BEG KHAN GHALIB

AN INTRODUCTION:

Ghalib Is Regarded As The Most Important Urdu-Language Poet Of The Nineteenth Century. Praised In Particular For His Artful Use Of The Short Lyric Form Known As The Ghazal, He Also Wrote Poetry In Other Forms, Numerous Volumes Of Letters, And A Compelling Account Of The Sepoy Rebellion Of 1857, An Attempt By Natives Of India To Overthrow British Colonial Rule.

MAJOR WORKS:

In 1841, Ghalib Published His Collected Urdu Poems, Divan-I-Ghalib. His Next Book Did Not Appear Until 1849, When He Produced Panj Ahang, A Kind Of Handbook On The Writing Of Letters And Poetry Interspersed With Samples Of His Own Work; Throughout The Next Decade, He Published Only Sporadically. In 1857, Ghalib Was Forced To Reassess His Great Admiration For Western Culture When The British Rulers Of India Responded To The Sepoy Rebellion With Violence, Martial Law, And The Forced Exile Of Delhi’s Muslim And Hindu Populations. Eighteen Months After The Start Of The Fighting, He Published Dastanbu, His Memoirs Of The Suffering Brought On By The Conflict, And Sent Copies To Various British Officials, Including Queen Victoria, Both To Plead For Moderation In The Treatment Of Indians And To Establish His Own Innocence In The Rebellion. At This Time, Motivated By The Realization That Most Of His Unpublished Manuscripts Had Been Destroyed When The Rebels And British Alike Looted The Libraries Of Delhi, Ghalib Attempted To Gather His Remaining Ghazals Into Expanded Editions Of His Divan. In The Loneliness Caused By The Deaths And Exile Of Many Of His Friends, Ghalib Began To Write Several Letters A Day For Solace; Many Of These Were Collected For Publication. Despite Rapidly Failing Health In His Later Years, Ghalib Helped Edit Some Of These Collections And Critiqued Poems Sent To Him By Poets All Over India. He Died In 1869.

GHAZAL:

Baaziichaa-E-Atfaal Hai Duniyaa Mere Aage
Hotaa Hai Shab-O-Roz Tamaashaa Mere Aage

Ik Khel Hai Aurang-E-Sulemaan Mere Nazdiik
Ik Baat Hai Ijaaz-E-Masiihaa Mere Aage

Juz Naam Nahiin Suurat-E-Aalam Mujhe Manzuur
Juz Vahm Nahiin Hastii-E-Ashyaa Mere Aage

Hotaa Hai Nihaan Gard Men Sehraa Mere Hote
Ghistaa Hai Jabiin Khaak Pe Dariyaa Mere Aage

Mat Puuchh Ke Kyaa Haal Hai Meraa Tere Piichhe
Tuu Dekh Ke Kyaa Rang Hai Teraa Mere Aage

Sach Kahte Ho Khud’biin-O-Khud’aaraa Huun Na Kyuun Huun
Baithaa Hai But-E-Aa’iinaa-Siimaa Mere Aage

Phir Dekhiye Andaaz-E-Gul’afshaanii-E-Guftaar
Rakh De Ko’ii Paimaanaa-E-Sahbaa Mere Aage

Nafrat Ka Gumaan Guzre Hai Main Rashk Se Guzraa
Kyuun Kar Kahuun Lo Naam Naa Us Kaa Mere Aage

Iimaan Mujhe Roke Hai Jo Khiinche Hai Mujhe Kufr
Kaabaa Mere Piichhe Hai Kaliisaa Mere Aage

Aashiq Huun Pe Maashuuq-Farebii Hai Mera Kaam
Majnuun Ko Buraa Kahtii Hai Lailaa Mere Aage

Khush Hote Hain Par Vasl Men Yuun Mar Nahiin Jaate
Aayii Shab-E-Hijraan Kii Tamannaa Mere Aage

Hai Mauj’zan Ik Qulzum-E-Khuun Kaash! Yahii Ho
Aataa Hai Abhii Dekhiye Kyaa-Kyaa Mere Aage

Go Haath Ko Jumbish Nahiin Aankhon Men To Dam Hai
Rahne Do Abhii Saaghar-O-Miinaa Mere Aage

Ham’peshaa-O-Ham’mashrab-O-Ham’raaz Hai Meraa
Ghalib Ko Buraa Kyuun Kaho Achaa Mere Aage

REASON FOR LIKING:

What Should I Write Under This Heading, Because Each Part Of This Ghazal Is So Beautifully Constructed Ke Bus…

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Amal