Re: Best of Anwaar Qureshi
bohat acha sair hei.....tora wazan mangta hei ..khyal khobsoorat....
aap baa wazan kar dijiye :)
isgazal main kuch sheir bohat khyal afroz hein..mein ab one by one tumhara thread parh rahi hoon .
It's an honour
talakh hei bhai
Such kaRwaa aur HaQeeqat talkh hee hoti hai :-)
Mitti kay gharoNday saahil par banaanay waalay y yahan qadar ka lafz ziyada hei
wo hath aj tameer ka muqadr theray........
I first similar to what you have written but the feelings in my heart forced me to put an emphasis on using the word "Mujaddid" - the one who "RENEWS" .. Ta'meer tau har koi kar letaa hai .. laikin aisee ta'meer jiss maiN pehlaY mojoodaa imaarat ko muhadam kiyaa jaaYe aur az sar-e-Nau buniyaad ko uThaayaa jaaYe, Tajdeed kee mutaaqaazi hoti hai.. just my thoughts.. my thoughts may not follow the strict rules and guidelines of poetry but as I've told I do not consider my self a shaair anyway..
mera maqsad correctin nahi hei
laikin agar yehi maQsad ho tau maiN apni khush naseebi samjhooN gaa..
balkh khobsoorat idea ko nikharna hei .........can,t stop myself .plz sorry...........
please, do not stop ... it's my request...