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hi Anwaar .main ne tumhari nzmoon sa jo akhaz kia hai wo khyal ki kefiyat hai.USA main rhete hwoey bhi shairana mizaj mubarik ho.mera mashwara hai kh tweel nazam urdu font k sath agar ho to us ki kafiyat achi trha sumajh ati hai Dcember kipoems khobsoorat akasi hai. mujhay ye bat achi lagi kh jo bat dil main ho wo brjasta kh do or mohabat wali nazam ka khyal pasand aya.
Agreed.
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Then, I won't be able to write or post here for that matter ever :D:D
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am not as good of a poet but I will try something fil-badeeh and I am sure Amal can find out the 'out of rythm' phenomenon in it
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anwar qureshi > acha to phir app sub shaaire kis perda nasheen say ker wa rahay hain jub kay app good poet nahi to ?
Rifaaqat Mukhtasir ho laikin Yaad mukhtasir naheeN hotee
*Insaan baY wafaa ho laikin Mohabbat kufr naheeN hotee*
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good one ... specielley these word Muhabat kufr nahi hotee
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Mohabbat sirf piyar naheeN hotee
Mohabbat ik aag hoti hai
Mohabbat haar naheeN hotee
Mohabbat saaNch hotee hai
Mohabbat chaah naheeN hotee
Mohabbat piyaas hotee hai
Mohabbat maiN basaarat hai
Baseerat anjaan hotee hai
Aqal, iss aag maiN chaY ma'ani?
Mohabbat Rooh hotee hai
Mohabbat aye jaan-e-jaanaaN
sadaa yeh dil kee hotee hai
Rung-e-tagha'i-ur hai chehroN pe
Rooh magar abdaal hotee hai
Mohabbat dil maiN bastee hai
Mohabbat dildaar hotee hai
Mohabbat waqt kee naheeN paaband
yeh umer-e-rawaaN kee hotee hai
Jo chehroN pe martaY haiN
woh mohabbat naheeN kartaY
Jo deewanay haiN bannaY phirtaY
woh ik jism pe martaY haiN
Jo dil ko naa paRh paaYeN
Mohabbat unn ko naheeN hotee
Jo khud gharaz bun jaaYeN
Rifaaqat unn say naheeN hotee
Rifaaqat pe hai yaad aayaa
Rifaaqat mukhtasir bhee hotee hai
Mohabbat mukhtasir naheeN hotee
Yaad bhee mukhtasir naheeN hotee
Mohabbat yaad hai shaayad
yaad zindagi naheeN hotee
Mohabbat zindagi hai laikin
yaad ik rafeeq hotee hai
BaRay Mehboob miltaY haiN
inn galiyoN maiN, koochoN maiN
Laikin baat yeh baaNdh rakh Anwaar
Mohabbat sar-e-raah naheeN hotee
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another nice poem .. kinayaat say bherpoor .. jo kalam ko mazeed faseeh banatee hay ..
Question
*1>muhabat kay baray main jo kuch likha hay is ki bunyad mushidaat per hay ya tajerbaat per ? *
*2
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*> **Rung-e-tagha'i-ur hai chehroN pe
Rooh magar abdaal hotee hai
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**
mujhay yeh samjh nahi aya abdaal say abadeeee?
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Mohabbat chaah naheeN hotee
Mohabbat piyaas hotee hai
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muhabat main chah nahi hotee ... to phir piyaas ka ahsas kaisai ho ga ?
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A very good idea Amal:k:
Anwar bhai i read your 10 best , kaafi long hain but nice stuff:-)
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If you have passion, you will be forced to write. You will find yourself too weak to stop your pen. Don’t write for us, write for your passion.
I think he meant that mohabbat does not happen by wish, it happens naturally, like thirst. Let us see how Anwaar explains it 
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I think he meant that mohabbat does not happen by wish, it happens naturally, like thirst. Let us see how Anwaar explains it :)
:)
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Mushaahidaati Tajurbaat par 
Abdaal = In sufism, there is a term called Abdaal which comes from “Badal” that may mean differently in different context. For example, one of its meaning is that the rank of one Sufi transfers to the other after his death. Second meaning is what we call “Laahoot” as in “Taair-e-Laahooti” of Iqbal’s famous couplet. It also means pervaaz and the power to fly one place to another independent of time.
I think Amal has explained it better than I could..
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I think he meant that mohabbat does not happen by wish, it happens naturally, like thirst. Let us see how Anwaar explains it
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amal > ahaan now got it thanx ..main is ko dosree terah perh rahee thee .good explalnation ..agar app mere urdu kay teacher hotay to shaid mere matric main urdu main itnay kam number na atay lolzz
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Mushaahidaati Tajurbaat par
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Anwar qureshi > acha Gool mool jawab diya hay footbaal ki terah
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Abdaal = In sufism, there is a term called Abdaal which comes from "Badal" that may mean differently in different context. For example, one of its meaning is that the rank of one Sufi transfers to the other after his death. Second meaning is what we call "Laahoot" as in "Taair-e-Laahooti" of Iqbal's famous couplet. It also means pervaaz and the power to fly one place to another
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aha zabardast chalo mujhay laahote ka mulub bhi pata chal gya kafe arsay say main is ki talash main bhi thee .. thanx ...app bhi urdu kay achay teacher ban saktay hain
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Nai ruto~on ki chandni main
guzartay lamhon ki ashuftagi main
wo saye kitne veeran kar gaye
zindagi ki sa~aton main
ham~safaron ko juda jo kar gaye
wo insan kitnay be-rehem niklay
rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye
badalte rishton kay angun main
chura kay daman
bacha kar nazrain
jhatak kar hathon ko
wo naye rishton ko amar kar gaye
jo ajnabi raston par
ajnabi lamhon ki aghosh main
Nai ruto~on ki chandni main
guzartay lamhon ki ashuftagi main
wo saye kitne veeran kar gaye
zindagi ki sa~aton main
ham~safaron ko juda jo kar gaye
wo insan kitnay be-rehem niklay
rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye
badalte rishton kay angun main
chura kay daman
bacha kar nazrain
jhatak kar hathon ko
wo naye rishton ko amar kar gaye
jo ajnabi raston par
ajnabi lamhon ki aghosh main
ajnabi fiza main
ajnabi ashnaon main
hum ko ajnabiat kay supurd kar gaye
dil cheernay wale
raqabaton ki aag main
wohi log dua kar gaye
rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye
cheernay wale
raqabaton ki aag main
wohi log dua kar gaye
rifaqataiN jo neelam kar gaye
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bohat he zabardast .. is nazam ka nam Rishtoon ki haqeeqat jaisa hona chaeye ...bohat hee haqeeqe tanazur main mehsoos hotee hay
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ajnabi fiza main
ajnabi ashnaon main
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main yahan phir attak gayee ..ajanbi or ashna yeh dono to mutazad alfaz nahi ..? kia yahan app ki murad RAWEYE hain apnoo kay ? plz dont say **
**is ka mutlub yehi hay ..lolzz
2>kee yeh jo nazmoon ki terteeb app nay kee hay apni pasand kay layhaz say ki hay ?
** 3> app ko apni nazmoon per yoon sawal jawab hotay dekhna kaisa lag raha hay ..is ley pooocha kay professional shaire or personal shire main ferq hota hay ...baz oqaat log is ko pasand nahi kertay **
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bohet acha idea amal bechay...jeetay rehain khoush rehain......aur jald hi apni poetry bhi share kerna app :)
Anwaar bechay kafi arsay say kafi nazmain perhin app ki.....app jub bhi share kertay hain bohet khoub kertay hain....per i think thora kem kem hi kertay hain...
aik to bechay app ki himmet ki daad daiti hoon itny taweeeeeeef nazmain likh laitay hain......aur itnay khoubsouret andaaz main k banda adhi perh k ukta k choor nahi pata......aur kabhi kabhi itny sakeel urdu istamal kertay hain k mujh bichari k ouper sya guzer jaty hay :(
achi nazmain share kertay rehain:)
jeetay rheian khoush rehain
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well iss kaa matlab YEHI hai 
hmmm.. haaN mutaazaad alfaaz haiN laikin you must have heard of english term Oxymoron… you see some people are known to you and you think you know them but you do not know the strangeness of their feelings for you… haaN shayad you are right… Rawiiye .. hmmm
Nope… just went through the list and take them out chronologically as much as possible
Better than before… Scared and Sharmindagi ho rahi hai.. aap loug itnaY keeRay nikaal rahai haiN 
Bari_bee: thank you
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Congratulation Anwar me zara thora late aiey per a tu gaye na ..nice contribution..:)
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3. Better than before... Scared and Sharmindagi ho rahi hai.. aap loug itnaY keeRay nikaal rahai haiN
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Anwar qureshi > toba kaisai hain .or jo itnee tonoo or manoo kay hisaab say tareefain ho rahee hain un ka zikker he nahi ...
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Hilaal-e-Eid kee khushiyaaN
chehray par har ik shakhs kay
phel rahi haiN!
intezaar-e-eid maiN
tuloo-e-mehtaab kee muntazir
har ik chashm-e-baitaab hai!
mohabbat aaj uss shakhs ko bhee
chaand say ho gaie hai
kay jiss ko chaand
kee thaNdi chaaouN maiN
chaand kay daagh kaa nishtar
chubhtaa hai har lamhay dil maiN
aur nafrat chaand say
jiss ko az'li ho gaie hai!
kaisa alamiya hai kay
nafratouN kay sel-e-rawaaN maiN
munaafiqtouN kay behr-e-bay karaaN maiN
ik sharaaraa-e-mohabbat dikhla kar
ik din ki khushi manaa kar
louT jaye gaa woh
zindagi maiN apni waapis
yeh eid kee khushiyaaN!
kiya masnoo'ee haiN?
Hilaal-e-Eid kee khushiyaaN
chehray par har ik shakhs kay
phel rahi haiN!
intezaar-e-eid maiN
tuloo-e-mehtaab kee muntazir
har ik chashm-e-baitaab hai!
mohabbat aaj uss shakhs ko bhee
chaand say ho gaie hai
kay jiss ko chaand
kee thaNdi chaaouN maiN
chaand kay daagh kaa nishtar
chubhtaa hai har lamhay dil maiN
aur nafrat chaand say
jiss ko az'li ho gaie hai!
kaisa alamiya hai kay
nafratouN kay sel-e-rawaaN maiN
munaafiqtouN kay behr-e-bay karaaN maiN
ik sharaaraa-e-mohabbat dikhla kar
ik din ki khushi manaa kar
louT jaye gaa woh
zindagi maiN apni waapis
yeh eid kee khushiyaaN!
kiya masnoo'ee haiN?
Muhabbat kaa libaadah
kiyaa itnaa hee tamaskhuranaa hai?
kay badaltay mausam maiN
jub libaas badal jatay haiN
Muhabbat bhee badal jaati hai?
insaan badal jaatay haiN?
dil badal jaatay haiN?
jo kissi kay liye aaj ik hilaal hai
woh kal ussi kay liye daagh-e-hilaal hai?
Jo haiN hilaal-e-eid kay hus'n par mar miTnay waalay
mehtaab-e-mukammal say nafrat unhaiN hai
jo na mukammal hai, woh laaiq-e-muhabbat?
jo takmeel paa gayaa, aankh kaa shahteer wohi hai?
Jo haiN hilaal-e-eid kay hus'n par mar miTnay waalay
mehtaab-e-mukammal say nafrat unhaiN hai
jo na mukammal hai, woh laaiq-e-muhabbat?
jo takmeel paa gayaa, aankh kaa shahteer wohi hai
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we can say last two verse are central idea of ur poem
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Muhabbat kaa libaadah
kiyaa itnaa hee tamaskhuranaa hai?
kay badaltay mausam maiN
jub libaas badal jatay haiN
Muhabbat bhee badal jaati hai?
insaan badal jaatay haiN?
dil badal jaatay haiN?
jo kissi kay liye aaj ik hilaal hai
woh kal ussi kay liye daagh-e-hilaal hai?
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dis part which i like most in this poem ....
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kay jiss ko chaand
kee thaNdi chaaouN maiN
chaand kay daagh kaa nishtar
chubhtaa hai har lamhay dil maiN
aur nafrat chaand say
jiss ko az'li ho gaie hai
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or is bat per to app ki ik poore nasar tehreer bhi mojood hay .agar kisi ko yeh shair na samjh aye to ap ki woh tehreer is ki tashreeh bhi nam sakte hay na
am i right?
wiasai is nazam ka idea bohat mukhlif hay eid kay chaand kay sath muhabat or logoon kay badltay mizaj ka zikker ....
1> is ka subject app kay zeyhan main aya kis terah tha ?..dont take it personal ..mutlub yeh hay kay bunyaad kia thee?
2> or in ten poems main app ko sub say achee kon se lagtee hay ?
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Problem_girl: First of all, thank you for not getting bored 
and thank you for selecting such striking questions:halo: How do you know all that :o???
well .. yeah, they are !!!
Me too
EKKKKK-JEKTLY thank you for reading between the lines and with such deepness and that too by taking things in perspective in line of context .. WoW
Yes .. it is.. It is meant to be different :~)
Sub bataa dooN
haath per kaTwaa looN
Jail chalaa jaaouN??? :halo:
[Can’t tell everything.. not everything is meant to be told… somethings are meant to be felt somewhere deep down in the darkness of hearts]
Hilaal-e-Eid and my December sequel…
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Umer-e-rawaaN kay saathi raqeeb Thehray
YouN Apnay AaNgun kay hum Ajnabi Thehra
y
bohat acha sair hei.....tora wazan mangta hei ..khyal khobsoorat.....
isgazal main kuch sheir bohat khyal afroz hein..mein ab one by one tumhara thread parh rahi hoon .
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HaiN Dhoop kay dushman ghar kay bund darwaazay
Hum jo ik andheray makaaN kay makeeN Thehray
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talakh hei bhai
Mitti kay gharoNday saahil par banaanay waalay
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Woh haath aaj taa'meer-e-Qadar kay Mujaddid Thehra
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y
yahan qadar ka lafz ziyada hei
wo hath aj tameer ka muqadr theray........
mera maqsad correctin nahi hei
balkh khobsoorat idea ko nikharna hei .........can,t stop myself .plz sorry...........
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Anwaar ko jb ham parthtay hain to is ke haan ehsas ki bohat shidat milti hay.abhi main hilale eid parh rhi thi .kardwahat ko qtra qtra peena bohat mushkil hota hai.
problam girl tumhari chan phatak pasand aae.dar asal anwaar aik talkh nwa shaier hai. wo qan ko bhi ksaili goli ki tarha nighalta hai.zindagi ki haqeeqat ko zara bhi camo flaj nahi karta.jaisa kh hilal e eid ki khushiyon par wo siska hai .wo logon ki behisi pr odas nazar ata hei .us ke han gam or dhkh pasandi milti hei.
December main wo thora romantic nazar ata hai magar os ki gam parasti nahi jati.
continue.......................................
yaaron ki mohabbat ka
~~Yaaroon Ki Mohabbat Ka Yakin Karliya Maine...~~
~~Pholoon Main Chupaya Hua Khanjar Nahin Dekha...~~[FONT=Times New Roman]
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**Bhai Amal… **
aap mubarakbad ke mustahaq hain, ke yahan aik sanjeeda thread ka aaghaaz hua, main masroofiyat ki wajha se kuch ghair hazir tha, achanak aisa laga mausam badal raha hai, khair Bhai AQ bhi mubarakbaad ke haqdaar hain ke unhun ne, apni cheezen pahle pesh kardi, mukhtasar yeh ke AQ aik
natural Poet hain, inke yahan nazmain bari sanjeeda hoti hain, NY main rahte hue bhi, itni lambi lambi nazmain kahna aasaan kaam nahi, magar yeh tawalat kabhi kabhi, parhne walon ko gumrah bhi karti hai, nazmon ka tasalsul qaem rakhna bara kaam hai, magar usmain rawani bhi zaroori hai, aap ke yahan rawaani khoob hai, lafzon ki bandish achhi hai, magar kahen kahen aap kho jate hain, aur mujhe puri nazm phir se parhna parti hai ke main ne kiya miss kiya, magar choti bahron main baat kahne ka saleeqa aap khoob jante hain, magar mere bhai, taweel nazmon ki editing bhi zaroori hai, ke aajkal sab kuch hai, magar waqt ki tangi hai, in tamaam baton ke bawajood qudrat ne aapko saaf dil aur sacchha qalam diya hai, aur yeh bari Na’mat hai, hum main se kitne hain, jo aisi nazmain raqam kar sakte hain…majmooyee taur par AQ ki shairee bari readable hai, ismain tazgi hai, magar mujhe hairat hai, ke in nazmon main western element ya symbols kyon nahi…
**aisi achhi nazmain karachi main baith kar bhi likkhi jasakti thi, magar jab ek poet maghrib main aabaad hai, to uski nazmain, MAHJARI yani immigrant’s feelings, problem and pleasures and experiences ka Aaina hoti to aur achha hota, this is my feeling, hosakta hai, aisi nazmain AQ ki Jholi main ho aur woh kisi wajha se share nahi karrahe …kiya AQ bhai… aap ne aisi nazmain kahi hain, agar nahi to kyon nahi…? yeh aik adab ke talibilm ka sawal hai, zaroori nahi ke aap jawaab bhi den. **
**Magar…jo mayassar hai…Ghaneemat hai, and I am proud to be a part of this fruitful and learning discussion… lastly AQ zindabaad !
**
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Jesa keh Amal nai kaha hai, no smilies no Thumbs Ups baat karni hai. To Anwaar main aap sai kuchh sawal karoun gi jesay keh aap ki sa'iri sai mehsoos hota hai keh aap ka mehboob guraiz pa hai. Woh majboor nahi bewafa hai. Keya aisa hi hai?...lol.
Mohabbat ka tajurba khushgawar nahi hai? Ya aap tareek pehlo par zeyada nazar rakhtay hain.
Ji Amal bhai keya aisay sawaloun ki ijjazat hai?
Aur Khalid Qureshi kidher hai? Nazar nahi aa raha.....Naseeb-e-dushmana tabiyat to theek hai? Aap ki khush raho ki duayen bari yaad aati hain.
Darwesh kay kheyal sai mujhay itafaq hai. Insan apnay mahol sai zaroor mutasir hota hai jabkeh aap ki nazam ka mahol bilkul Pakistani hai.
khaamosh tamashaayi ki
Khaamosh Tamashaayi Ki Maanind Sar-e-Bazm
So Zakham Sahey Dil Pe , Shikaayet bi Nahi Ki
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bohat acha sair hei.....tora wazan mangta hei ..khyal khobsoorat....
aap baa wazan kar dijiye :)
isgazal main kuch sheir bohat khyal afroz hein..mein ab one by one tumhara thread parh rahi hoon .
It's an honour
talakh hei bhai
Such kaRwaa aur HaQeeqat talkh hee hoti hai :-)
Mitti kay gharoNday saahil par banaanay waalay y yahan qadar ka lafz ziyada hei
wo hath aj tameer ka muqadr theray........
I first similar to what you have written but the feelings in my heart forced me to put an emphasis on using the word "Mujaddid" - the one who "RENEWS" .. Ta'meer tau har koi kar letaa hai .. laikin aisee ta'meer jiss maiN pehlaY mojoodaa imaarat ko muhadam kiyaa jaaYe aur az sar-e-Nau buniyaad ko uThaayaa jaaYe, Tajdeed kee mutaaqaazi hoti hai.. just my thoughts.. my thoughts may not follow the strict rules and guidelines of poetry but as I've told I do not consider my self a shaair anyway..
mera maqsad correctin nahi hei
laikin agar yehi maQsad ho tau maiN apni khush naseebi samjhooN gaa..
balkh khobsoorat idea ko nikharna hei .........can,t stop myself .plz sorry...........
please, do not stop ... it's my request...