Bekhudi

**Bekhudi
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Ik mauj-e-samndar-e-qaynaat hai zindagi

Khud hi jwaab aur swaalaat hai zindagi

Khud ki talaash yeh safar-e-hyaat

Abhi din ki aarzu ab justju-e- raat

Kuch jaani pehchani raahon pay

UmroN kay qaafilay

Ghardish-e-doraaN main pinha manzilaiN

Kabhi manzil ka pa laina

Phir us say uqta jaanaa

Yeh shauq-e-manzil nahi

Shayud jeenay ka bus bahaanaa

Jab bar gayi bahut tanhai

Banaya phulsupha-e-khudai

But banayay banai azaanaiN

Phir sajaai rishton ki dukaanaiN

Jab jab bhi khud say uqtaiya insaaN

Daur-e-wehshat main laut aayaa insaaN

Is hajoom-e-zindagi main tanha hai har koi

Bus giraphat-e-khwaab-e-bahaanaa hai har koi

Ik bhatkan umr kay jaNgloN main

Liyay beqasi-e-namaloom diloN main

Har koi jiyay jaataa hai

Dard-o-masarrat kay ajab saNgam ko

Unwaan-e-zindgi diyay jaataa hai


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Nice:-)

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Great

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thanx a lot

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Aek aur khoobsoorat tehreer :k: **Brijinder **aap ki tehreeroN meiN bohat gehraai hoti hey. You always make me stop and think. Thanx for being here :slight_smile: :flower1:

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Amal,I try to put what i gained from my understanding of the wisdoms of east n west.Poetry,for me,is not merely an attrctive arrangement of words but to delve within and try to understand the world around me.
The purpose of the poetry is to make the reader pause n think.If I am successful in that,it is the reward of my poetry.
Thanx once again

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I know your poetry does not have commercial attractiveness. It may not appeal our younger lot because it tells of something else. It is not meant for everyone - just like classical music. You are not a poet from the common run. You have a class and that’s why your work is classical. You offer a certain level of depth in your poetry which is almost rare - especially on GS. darwesh is also from your class. He also sometimes write a full book in a single line. And that’s what you also do. I hope to learn this art from you guys. Let me repeat myself again, thanx for being here :slight_smile:

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Thanx Amal for giving me so much honour.I am moved by the beautiful words of your appreciation.

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Pleasure is mine :)

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very nice Brijinder....Keep it up

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Thanx a lot

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**I totally agree with Amal. Brijinder your poetry has a depth and it is meaningful. You bring out the real issues and just like Amal has said earlier, it makes me stop and think too. Your words make me ponder and think about the true nature of life. Short but comprehensive... as u have said here

** Khud ki talaash yeh safar-e-hyaat

Abhi din ki aarzu ab justju-e- raat

**Keep writing and sharing with us.

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Thanx a lot,Farha,for the thoughful words.If my poetry manages to provoke you into thinking and if that thinking brings out a postive change,it is the reward of a poem.
regards