BEETAY LUMHOON KI YAAD

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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                                                              NAZAM

                                         Beetay lumhoon ki yaad hum ko bohat satati hey
                                         paoon main ye zunjeer hum ko bohat rulati hey

                                        hum tu haar chukey ishaq main sub kutch apna
                                       zindgi khealney per juwa phir bhe oksati hey

                                       hum hain or teree yaadoon ki aankh macholi hey
                                       khbe tu aati nhe aati hey aati tu phir nhe jati hey

                                      jab hum ko tushngi-e-sharab nhe phir kyun
                                      dbo ker ungli pani main hum ko tu pilati hey

                                     ek arsa say tamana thee humain lumbey safar ki
                                     bhala ho teree yaad ka doour tuk ley jati hey

                                    tu maang dua os ki daraaz-e-zindgi key liey
                                    mearey diey ki lou aaj shaam say tumtmati hey

                             SHUB-E-WASAL KI AAS MAIN MUHLAT KUTCH MAANGI'SHAH G'
                             MOUAT TU EK MUDAT SAY MEARY GHAR K CHAKAR LAGATI HEY   


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ye ghazal hai ya nazm?

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Bohat Khoob........

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ghazal hey my freind title ghalt likha gia....sorry 4 that

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no sorry shah ji.. aaj kal wazan si giri ghalen aa rahi hain .. to wazan wali nazm dekh kar pooch liya :p

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Shukar hy TIGER bahiya nhi hyn…warna WaZzn hi ly k bhaag ja`ty…:cb:

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weasy tiger ki ye aadt achi nhe…kisi ka wazan uthna..lol

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wazan zyada tha warna…

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thnx 4 complement...

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kiya lollywood ki majh thi?

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wazan uthana achi baat nahi...par bojh uthana achi baat hai

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TIGER bhaiya ki Choice hy kia keh sakty hy........

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very nice Shah G :k:

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wazan ziyada ho to kuch diar mein bojh ban jata hy.........

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unko uthanay say tu luk tut jaye banday ka

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chalain jo uthna hey uthain tiger...konsa peasey lagtey hain

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dil say uthao...tu kabhi bojh nahi lagay ga

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Nice…:k:

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  • dil ki khushi k liey.....khandoon ki waat lag jati hey*
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bilkul sahi

lekin kuch bojh aisay hotay hain jin ko uthanay kay liyay kandhon ki nahi.......himmat ki zaroorat hoti hai bas