Beauty by AHMAD FARAZ...

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 23, 2005, 10:18am

HonT heerooN se, na chehra hay Sitaray ki misaal
Phir bhi Laday tou koi Dost hamaray ki Misaal

Mujh se kia Dobnay walooN ka pata poochntay ho
MaiN samandar ka hawala na kinaray ki misal

Zindagi auRh ke beThi thi Rida-e-Shabe Gham
Tera Gham Taank dia humne sitaray ki misal

Aashiqi ko bhi Hawas Pesha, Tijarat jaanaiN
Wasl hay nafaa tou HijraaN hay Khasaray ki misal

Hum kabhi TooT ke roye na kabhi khul ke hansay
Raat Shabnam ki tarha, Subha Sitaray ki Misal

Nasapasi ki bhi hadd hay jo ye kehtay ho Faraz
Zindagi Humne Guzari hay Guzaray ki misal.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · March 23, 2005, 12:36pm

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Nice poem, itni rang-barangi kyon hay:p

Aceones · March 23, 2005, 7:24pm

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nazam tumarhi hay g o l a y g a n d a y ki misaal
nice one :k: beautiful words

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 24, 2005, 4:45am

Re: Beauty by AHMAD FARAZ…

GUL… Rang Barangi iss liye hay ke… MaiN chahta tha ke.. Aik aik Sher Alag ALg nazar aye…

ACE… Shukria…

Nazam hamari naheeN hay… Faraz ki hay yar… :smcak:

ghazal_kisi_ke · March 24, 2005, 5:05am

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Mujh se kia Dobnay walooN ka pata poochntay ho
MaiN samandar ka hawala na kinaray ki misal

very nice ..

homer_j_simpson · March 24, 2005, 6:07am

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very good :k:

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 27, 2005, 8:21am

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Thanks Ghazal and Homer :)

Koyal · March 27, 2005, 6:25pm

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Hum kabhi TooT ke roye na kabhi khul ke hansay
kabhi asi Koyal ki b do rang barangi misal

:k:

Golden_Scorpion_1 · March 29, 2005, 4:42am

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/\
Hum ghame Dil ko zubaaN per naheeN laatay thay kabhi
Aaj ye dard hay awaza ka, Koyal ki Misal....
(Golden)

Ab Khush... Tuharay liye.. bhi HO gaya Shair ;)

system · April 4, 2005, 8:27am

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Hum kabhi TooT ke roye na kabhi khul ke hansay
Raat Shabnam ki tarha, Subha Sitaray ki Misal

bohat khoobsoorat :)

Zakhmi_Umar · April 4, 2005, 9:08am

Re: Beauty by AHMAD FARAZ…

buhat khoob :k:

wasal nafaa
hijraan khasara

buhat hi achay thanks for sharing

system · April 4, 2005, 3:36pm

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Mujh se kia Dobnay walooN ka pata poochntay ho
MaiN samandar ka hawala na kinaray ki misal

beautiful :k::k:

Golden_Scorpion_1 · April 5, 2005, 4:52am

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Buhut sara THANKS … Ahsan, Zakhmo and ViVo…

Zakhmo… Wasl is not Nafa… Its… MILNA… Mulaqaat

And.. Hijraan… JUDAI…

Now I an Guess ke.. URDU ke Paper tum ne… Kesay Pass kiye ho ngay

reet · April 10, 2005, 11:26am

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bahot khoob…thnx for sharing…

Golden_Scorpion_1 · April 11, 2005, 4:47am

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U r Welcome Reet :)

Zakhmi_Umar · April 11, 2005, 5:37am

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shaer ne wasl ko nafa kaha aur hijran ko khasara
mien ne tu tareef ki thi k kiya tashbeeh di hai

Golden_Scorpion_1 · April 11, 2005, 6:12am

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Aisi Tareef ko Neeyat ka Khalal Kehtay haiN .... :D

Zakhmi_Umar · April 11, 2005, 9:14am

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humm aap jealous keon ho rahe ho k mien ne shaer ki tareef ki per aap ki nahi ki

Golden_Scorpion_1 · April 11, 2005, 10:06am

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Janeman… Shair Ki Tareef karogay tou maiN bilkul Jelous naheeN honga…

Agar Shair Bhi Tumhari Tareed karay.. tab bhi no…

BUT… If… Agar… Kissi Shaira ne tumhari Tareef ki tou then… I will be.. Jealous

Jiss ka koi Chance naheeN hay

Zakhmi_Umar · April 11, 2005, 10:57am

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well

shaira meri tareef keon kare ge jeee , haan mien zaroor us ki karon ga
aur aap ko jealous karon ga