Re: Beautiful Poem By Mohsin Naqvi..................
NIce sharing :)
NikamiJano, you as a moderator, I understand, encourage others to post poetry here. That's is good.
But can you tell me what's great in this poem. Could you make a comment on the poem in any manner?
What I see is someone is missing his lover. It's a theme for a poem, no doubt. But here it's all telling and not much showing, if at all. What do you think?
PS: NikamiJano, we can discuss poetry if you could kindly visit the thread Shayer Fehmi. I thank** Anwaar** for making many interesting comments, and soon I will be responding. Regards.