be-simat tha safaR be thaknaY lagaY they peR be

Paglee · July 1, 2003, 10:41pm

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be-simat tha safaR be thaknaY lagaY they peR be
siR peR thei dhoop se auR jalti thei rahguzaR be

kuch dastakoN ka fuN be bhoola huwa tha muj ko
auR log sab muqafil rakhnaY lagaY theY daR be

kuch waham sa tha dil maiN kuch hosla be kum tha
badli huwie se thei kuch us shakas ki nazaR be

katna he tha shajaR ko is mosam-e-khizaaN maiN
pateY be jhaR chukaY theY auR phiR tha be-samaR be

is shahaR ko raza g! kesaY samaj laiN beena
miti maiN mil gaye haiN hum jesaY ba-hunaR be*

undefined · July 1, 2003, 10:56pm

very nice paglee !!

chand_chehra · July 2, 2003, 1:22am

Re: be-simat tha safaR be thaknaY lagaY they peR be

bohat khoob :k:

_Nazish · July 2, 2003, 1:45am

wah....bohat khoob!

WiseGuy · July 2, 2003, 3:24am

Nice....

Amarbail1 · July 2, 2003, 4:46am

Nice …:k:

Amal · July 2, 2003, 1:31pm

Re: be-simat tha safaR be thaknaY lagaY they peR be

lovely ghazal Paglee:k:…thanx for sharing:)

_Masoom_Muskaan · July 2, 2003, 2:44pm

boht achei paglee jee
btw ap kider gahib ho jatee

Black_Mamba · July 3, 2003, 10:08am

:k: nice one

Paglee · July 3, 2003, 8:38pm

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*Originally posted by undefined: *
very nice paglee !!
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thanks :)

Paglee · July 3, 2003, 8:40pm

Re: Re: be-simat tha safaR be thaknaY lagaY they peR be

thanks chando g

Paglee · July 3, 2003, 8:40pm

thanks bail...Wg..BM....:)

Paglee · July 3, 2003, 8:41pm

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Paglee · July 3, 2003, 8:42pm

me tu yehi hoti ap he ghum ho kahin ..and thanks