Be- naam Aansoo

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Be-Naam Aansoo (Nazm)

by Samina

Kal raat achanak…
aik baychaynii nay Dil pay
dastak dii

Aur Mein…
harbara kar uth baithi
Ghabra kar sochna chaha kay
yeh baychayni damangeer kiyon hai?
Kiyon Mera sukoon khafa ho raha hai?

Mein nay socha aur sochti chali gai…
khayaalon ko bikhera,
yaadon ko samaita
zehan kay niha’n khanon ko tatola
mager koi nishan nazar na aaya
koi sira na haath aaya

Yahan tak kay…
iss talaash main
soch kay paoon thak gay
khayaal saaray bhatak gay
yadain bhi khamosh raheen
aur hairaani say Mujhey taknay lageen

Kay!

Sirf aik jawaaz ki talaash nay
Merey andar kaisa toofaan barpa kar dia
phir main khud bhi thaknay lagi

magar habs tha kay barhta hi chala gya
Aankhoon mein jalan honay lagi

aur jab kuch samajh na aya too
Aik be-naam Aansoo
palkoon say sitaaray ki tarha toota
aur…
gaaloon pay bikhar gia

[Amal]

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@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Be-Naam Aansoo (Nazm)

by Samina

Sirf aik jawaaz ki talaash nay
Merey andar kaisa toofaan barpa kar dia
phir main khud bhi thaknay lagi

magar habs tha kay barhta hi chala gya
Aankhoon mein jalan honay lagi

aur jab kuch samajh na aya too
Aik be-naam Aansoo
palkoon say sitaaray ki tarha toota
aur…
gaaloon pay bikhar gia

This part is very touching :k:…wesey aap ney kabhi bataya nahi ke aap ka takahallus Samina hey. Very nice, nazm bhi aur takahallus bhi

[being_lonely]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

such a nice poem keep it up carez

[HeArT_HaCKeR]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

Nice :k:

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

Thanku loko, credit goes to samina:~)
Amal ji mein aapko kya kahoon Speechless

[Amal]

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@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Amal ji mein aapko kya kahoon Speechless

Kuch na kaho…kuch bhi na kaho :~)

[Prince_Ali]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

:k:

[Sannan]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

how sweet if it can be in urdu fonts ......

[system]

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@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Aik be-naam Aansoo palkoon say sitaaray ki tarha toota aur... gaaloon pay bikhar gia

sigh

Pyaari nazm hai Gul.. thank you for sharing :-)

[AnotherGuppy]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

verrry nicee…:k:

[safeena]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

Buhat khoubsurat ghazal hai..!

[GuL-e-Tasbeeh]

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@Sannan

how sweet if it can be in urdu fonts ......

isskay liye time ka hona zaroori cheez hay:-)

Thanks for liking this poem -- safeena ,Sannan, prince, Anotherguppy, khamoshnigahein:-)

[Shab-e-Hijar]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

Nice poem gul :-)

[LP]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

bohot khoob.......
keep it up......

[being_lonely]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

hmmm nice :)

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

@GuL-e-Tasbeeh

Be-Naam Aansoo (Nazm)

by Samina

Kal raat achanak…
aik baychaynii nay Dil pay
dastak dii

Aur Mein…
harbara kar uth baithi
Ghabra kar sochna chaha kay
yeh baychayni damangeer kiyon hai?
Kiyon Mera sukoon khafa ho raha hai?

Mein nay socha aur sochti chali gai…
khayaalon ko bikhera,
yaadon ko samaita
zehan kay niha’n khanon ko tatola
mager koi nishan nazar na aaya
koi sira na haath aaya

Yahan tak kay…
iss talaash main
soch kay paoon thak gay
khayaal saaray bhatak gay
yadain bhi khamosh raheen
aur hairaani say Mujhey taknay lageen

Kay!

Sirf aik jawaaz ki talaash nay
Merey andar kaisa toofaan barpa kar dia
phir main khud bhi thaknay lagi

magar habs tha kay barhta hi chala gya
Aankhoon mein jalan honay lagi

aur jab kuch samajh na aya too
Aik be-naam Aansoo
palkoon say sitaaray ki tarha toota
aur…
gaaloon pay bikhar gia

:halo: yea kab kie bat hae

[yellowchoza]

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wow...taht just gave me goose bumps...awesome sharing!

[Precious_Khan]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

buhat khoob :k:

[_Masoom_Muskaan]

Re: Be- naam Aansoo

:k: