be khaloos

Be-khuloos logo’n se
Ijtinab karna hay
Mujhy apne rishto’n ka
Ehtisab karna hay
Usay bhool jana hay ya
Usay yaad rakhna hay ,Dukh tou ek jesa hay bs
Intikhab krna hay

Re: be khaloos

:lajawab:

Re: be khaloos

wow
ZABARDAST ZARA :clap:

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Loved it, meaningful :k:

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welcome to the poetry corner. :)

baa_Khuloos logoN se raabita rakhnaa hai to ahliyaan-e-GS Haazir-e-Khidmnat haiN...dunyaa meN Khuloos kii kamii hai to kia huaa, GS par to iskii faraavaanii hii faraavaanii hai! :)

Re: be khaloos

aap zair ka bohat kasrat sy istimal krty hain.is ki koi khas wajah? :hmmm:

Re: be khaloos

zer? u mean ‘underscore’? jab koii lafz murakkab [compound] hotaa hai yaa do alfaaz ke beech izaafat [connectivity] yaa vaao_'ataf [association] hai to maiN use zaahir karne ke liye “underscore” kaa nishaan iste’maal kartaa huN…

…baat vaazeH huii? :slight_smile: