Suno jaanaaN..!
humeiN jab sey mila hey ye sandesa.. ‘’ Ab Judaai hey’’
humaari aankh k aansoo
taRaptey dil ki noha karti ye dhaRkan
Bikharti saans ka resham
merey haathoN ki ye larzish
Meri baatoN ka toota-pan
merey hontoN ki neeli chup
ragoN meiN barf banta ye lahu mera
meri bikhri huwi neendoN ki kul poonji
adhooray khawaab sab merey
(tumhaarey lams ki khaahish)
tamanaaoN k tootey Aainey saarey
merey kamrey meiN bikhrey heiN
mujhey har-pal adhoori mout detey heiN
magar…
meiN kitni be-bass hooN
k kuch bhi kar nahi sakti
bichharney sey zara pehley
mukamal mar nahi sakti…
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one word "awesome"
bohat khoob .. bichranay say kuch pahlay mar bhi nahi sakti .:)
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Nice :K
PS. Death is quite a favt topic of yours now a days. earlier in one poem last line was " main mar chuki hoon" now "Mukammal Mar nahin sakti" :(
Re: -- be- bassi ka aalam --
dear Gul-e-tasbeeh,
this poem is marvelously exquisite.
a delightful read is your poetry!
meiN kitni be-bass hooN
k kuch bhi kar nahi sakti
bichharney sey zara pehley
mukamal mar nahi sakti.....
Very touchy n very nice:)
Nice :K
PS. Death is quite a favt topic of yours now a days. earlier in one poem last line was " main mar chuki hoon" now "Mukammal Mar nahin sakti" :(
aagey aagey dekhiye hota hey kya :D
aagey aagey dekhiye hota hey kya :D
kaya hayaat ba'ad uz mamaat pe discussion ho gi :D
kaya hayaat ba'ad uz mamaat pe discussion ho gi :D
waqt sey pehley kuch bhi nahi kaha ja sakta :-p
waqt sey pehley kuch bhi nahi kaha ja sakta :-p
sang-e-meel daikh kar manzil ka pata chal hi jata hai :p
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yaar gul parveen ko parhti hu aaj kal..ya kis shair ko....?
buhut qaatil kalaam hy....lagta hy mery dil ki aawaz hy.....thanks
ye beh kanwal ke hone he 
gul 
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Lajawab Sharing Gul :~)
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beautiful poem, thx for sharin Gul...
whos the poet?