~be basi~

maheen_sajid · July 24, 2003, 8:32pm

kabhi kabhi jab
zindagi ka koi ghum yaad kerke
tumhari ankhon mein ansoo bhar aatay hein
toa unko behta deikh ker
mera ji chahta hai
ke kaash yeh bhi jism rakhtay
toa mein un per utnay hi zakhm dalti
jitnay unko tumhari ankh se behta deikh ker
meray dil par partay hein !!!

by: maheen

Muslim_Queen · July 24, 2003, 8:35pm

Awwwwww its so nice

maheen_sajid · July 24, 2003, 8:41pm

thanx

Swera · July 24, 2003, 9:31pm

Good1....Really nice..

Keep it up!

Hawkeye · July 24, 2003, 10:41pm

Re: ~be basi~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by maheen sajid: *
ke kaash yeh bhi jism rakhtay
toa mein un per utnay hi zakhm dalti
jitnay unko tumhari ankh se behta deikh ker
meray dil par partay hein !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

by: maheen
[/QUOTE]

Maheen ji, aansooon ka kaya qasur hai ? Jo rulaata hai uska khaber lain ... aanso tou faqt izhaar hai dukh ka

BTW, nice poem :)

Koyal · July 25, 2003, 1:29am

nice one maheen ..:)

_Passionate · July 25, 2003, 1:41am

nice :~)

maheen_sajid · July 25, 2003, 1:52am

thanx again

PaGaL_dEwAnA · July 25, 2003, 1:59am

zAbArDuS:k:

Zakhmi_Umar · July 25, 2003, 11:01am

Re: ~be basi~

nice one :k: thanx for sharing

Zakhmi_Umar · July 25, 2003, 11:02am

Re: Re: ~be basi~

i agreed :k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 26, 2003, 12:00pm

Something different , Maheen buhat pyaarii nazm hay, keep it up and thanks for sharing :-)

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 26, 2003, 1:00pm

nice…:k:

umeed24 · July 26, 2003, 5:45pm

wonderful:k:

ASA · July 26, 2003, 7:52pm

very nice.....

maheen_sajid · July 26, 2003, 10:07pm

thanx alot gul

maheen_sajid · July 26, 2003, 10:10pm

thanx to u too hh,asa ,passionat,koyal,pd,hawkeye,umar and swera