Ab aya na camel mountain k down 
Okay all BB members don’t get shocked i have been asked to open this thread so here you go
Rules:
1.All old rules 
2.Shair should be your own and not genuine 
(let’s see the talent you people have)
If it is possible mention the year (in which it was written) or a brief background what made you write that shair (just for fun)
Start posting 
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
You own ?!?! Genuine?!?!
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
ye to shoarae gupshp ka thread hai
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
Kia hua?
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
ye to shoarae gupshp ka thread hai
what's the difference?
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
what's the difference?
Intikhab main hum doosron ke maal per hath saaf karte hain, baat jab apne shair ki aati hai to Shoara e gupshup is the right forum.
BTW: Nice idea, moving this to shoare gupshup. lets see how people can come up with their own takhleeqaat :)
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
I start with my shair wrote last year:
Ishq wo munsif ke saza hatmi hai
na koi jarah kare na koi daleel sune
kiyun likha tha yaad nahin, bus zehn main line atak gai thi :D
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
abhi babhi likha hy
irshad hy COUGHING GALA KHANKAAR KER SAAF KIA*
~~~~~~~~
AARZ KIA HY
sari dunia nikli hue hy GS pe 
ek vohi dushmany ja,n nzr nahi aata
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
^dushman kon
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
icon se kese pata chaley ga 
muqawee bhai kese ayi line zehan main hmmm
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
film Damini main Sunny deol ko line ‘tareekh pe tareekh tareekh pe tareekh’ kehte huwe sun kar 
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
her baar aik hi shair post kr dety hain 
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
kon kon 
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
Dil sy likha ho ga shayd isi liye :)
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
taaza tareen yehi tha na
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
aabla pai, bunjar pan, bewaja udaasi
ik beemari hai jisse ishq kehte hain
taaza taaza aamad 
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
ap k jiju kehty hein
“han bari BC adalat hy”
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
me
AP:wub:
keh deti per
av dekhi apni
Re: Bazam-e-shayari May 2013
ajiib husn hai un surKH surKH gaalo.n me.n
mai-e-do-aatisha bhar dii hai do piyaalo.n me.n