Bay naam Rishtay

AQ · December 2, 2003, 7:41am

Daagh-e-qamar kee maaniNd
meri guftaar kaa saleeqa

Tafannun kee ik aadat say
rang-e-zindagi huvaa aaj pheekaa

yaar kuch aisay bichaR gaye haiN
jo thay dosti maiN apni yaktaa

meri ik haNsi nay kaisa
yeh zulm dhaa diyaa hai

zindagi maiN logouN kee
maazi nahiN bhaTaktaa

dosti kay daawouN maiN
woh pal pal jeenay waalay

abb naye dostouN kee mehfil maiN
ik peghaam day rahay haiN:

“badal gayaa zamaana, badal gaye haiN hum bhee
naie dosti par apnaa aitebaar naa bharosaa”

bay wafaaie karnay waalay ilzaam day rahay haiN
guftugoo kee koshish maiN, bay wafaaie hum kar gaye haiN
reh kar kh’mosh, dil kee tassalli jo naa humm kartay
hum bay wafaa tub bhee thay, hum bay wafaa ab bhee haiN

aik baar dil ko toRR kar O’ phir joRnay waalay
Ab’r-e-Khushi say mujh ko ghum kaa meeNh dainay waalay
apnaa banaa kar ghairouN say pusst karnay waalay
tu nay iss dil ko sirf dau hee baar tau hai toRRaa

– Anwaar

Swera · December 2, 2003, 1:19pm

Anawar bhai ap bohat mushkil likhtaiN haiN…magar bohat hi acha liktaiN haiN..:k:

Thankx for sharing…

cuteepie · December 2, 2003, 1:46pm

it is very beautiful :k:

thanx for sharing

Azad · December 2, 2003, 9:09pm

humm

ullujii · December 3, 2003, 12:45am

cool :k:

she · December 3, 2003, 3:11am

uff kiya poem hai, koi rumal lay-aao jaldi sey.. ya phir balti ley aaoooo…Jaoo Jaldi, move fast

yaar kuch aisay bichaR gaye haiN
jo thay dosti maiN apni yaktaa

naie dosti par apnaa aitebaar naa bharosaa

Analysis
GOOD 4 TEMPORARY FRIENDSHIP…

isn’t it AQ:confused:

AQ · December 3, 2003, 3:16am

ghazal_kisi_ke · December 6, 2003, 12:52am

“badal gayaa zamaana, badal gaye haiN hum bhee
naie dosti par apnaa aitebaar naa bharosaa”

awesome:k::k:

thanx:flower1:

Philanthrope · December 6, 2003, 7:54am

Touchy

Bohat khoob Anwaar ..

AQ · December 7, 2003, 6:03am

thanks ghazaalooo

Philanthrope: why sad face:)? naz’m maiN nay likhi hai, udaas honay kaa haq sirf mujhay hai:snooty:

Capricorn · December 7, 2003, 10:21am

Re: Bay naam Rishtay

Do daffa!?
Reminds me of a Sindhi Kahawat
Aazmaye khe jo aazmaye
Dhoor munh mein paye :o

PS:- A very touchy and inspiring poetry Anwaar. I am impressed :k:

AQ · December 7, 2003, 10:29pm

Re: Re: Bay naam Rishtay

hahaha dau dafaa:) … ma’af tau ALLAH bhee kar daitaa hai laikin woh zaat jub maafi maaNgo maaf kar deti hai, Insaan aik dafaa aazmaataa hai, doosri dafaa moqaa detaa hai aur teesri dafaa dil paRh hee laitaa hai:p

WiseGuy · December 8, 2003, 4:30pm

Nice.

MR.Neo · December 8, 2003, 6:35pm

Good Anwaar bhai

system · December 11, 2003, 12:03pm

Beautiful, bohat achi hai