batao kaisa lagta hay ?

batao kesa lagta hai ?

kisi viran rasty pay
kisi anjan rasty pay
kisi ka sath mil jana
khushe kay phool khil jana

batao kaisa lagta hai!!!

aur us k bad, phir ik din…

kisi ka bichar jana
sabhi rangoon ka mit jana
woh band muthi main haaton ki
faqat kuch rait reh jana

batao kaisa lagta hai !!

Re: batao kaisa lagta hay ?

yahan aa kar tu mein udaas ho gae hon:(

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very nice poem PG…keep it up:flowers:

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hmmm first half bohoot acha lagta hai lakin second half udaas ker deta hai :(

nice sharing PG :).

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grand :lajawab:

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Main nahin batati.. :snooty:
End itna burra kyun kiya hai :hoonh:

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nice shairng :)

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Nice sharing..

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yar mainy END nahi kia ..shaair bhai nay kia hay

un ki MAJJ akhir main gawach gayee thee na naraz

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Mohabbat abb naheeN hogee
yeh kuch dinn baa'd maiN hogee

guzar jaayeN geY jub yeh dinn
yeh unn kee yaad maiN hogee

:)

Re: batao kaisa lagta hay ?

^ but again what faiz said

kon jeeta hay tere zulf kay sar honay tuk : P

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Bata Doon ??? :blush:

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wasn't it Ghalib :)?

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^ i dont think so confused

urdu point kholny ka mood nahi ; )

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Nice n sad nazam Pg welcome back :bb:

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nicee

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very nice,