P_G
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batao kesa lagta hai ?
kisi viran rasty pay
kisi anjan rasty pay
kisi ka sath mil jana
khushe kay phool khil jana
batao kaisa lagta hai!!!
aur us k bad, phir ik din…
kisi ka bichar jana
sabhi rangoon ka mit jana
woh band muthi main haaton ki
faqat kuch rait reh jana
batao kaisa lagta hai !!
SJ
2
Re: batao kaisa lagta hay ?
batao kesa lagta hai ?
kisi viran rasty pay
kisi anjan rasty pay
kisi ka sath mil jana
khushe kay phool khil jana
batao kaisa lagta hai!!!
yahan tak tu bohat he zayada acha lag raha hai.......
aur us k bad, phir ik din.......
kisi ka bichar jana
sabhi rangoon ka mit jana
woh band muthi main haaton ki
faqat kuch rait reh jana
batao kaisa lagta hai !!
yahan aa kar tu mein udaas ho gae hon:(
abeeha
3
Re: batao kaisa lagta hay ?
very nice poem PG…keep it up:flowers:
Sheal
4
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hmmm first half bohoot acha lagta hai lakin second half udaas ker deta hai :(
nice sharing PG :).
Re: batao kaisa lagta hay ?
grand 
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Main nahin batati.. 
End itna burra kyun kiya hai 
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nice shairng :)
EEMAAN
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Re: batao kaisa lagta hay ?
Nice sharing..
P_G
9
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yar mainy END nahi kia ..shaair bhai nay kia hay
un ki MAJJ akhir main gawach gayee thee na naraz
AQ
10
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Mohabbat abb naheeN hogee
yeh kuch dinn baa'd maiN hogee
guzar jaayeN geY jub yeh dinn
yeh unn kee yaad maiN hogee
:)
P_G
11
Re: batao kaisa lagta hay ?
^ but again what faiz said
kon jeeta hay tere zulf kay sar honay tuk : P
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Bata Doon ??? 
AQ
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^ but again what faiz said
kon jeeta hay tere zulf kay sar honay tuk : P
wasn't it Ghalib :)?
P_G
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^ i dont think so confused
urdu point kholny ka mood nahi ; )
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Nice n sad nazam Pg welcome back 
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nicee
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very nice,