Basti mein hai wo sannata k jangal maat lagy..

khawabRung · September 13, 2011, 6:39pm

Shaam dhaly bhi ghar pohanchon to aadhi raat lagy..

Khat mein dil ki batein likhna achi baat nahi,

Ghar mein itnay log hein jaany kis k haath lagy…

Un sy bichray dil ko ujray barson beet gaye,

Aankhon ka ye hal abhi tak kal ki baat lagy…

Mutthi band kiye baitha hon k koi daikh naa ly,

K chaand pakarny ghar sy nikla “jugnoo” haath lagy…!!!

pktun · September 14, 2011, 12:26am

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nyc 1 :k:

Sannan · September 19, 2011, 11:22am

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nice one

maya7492 · September 19, 2011, 11:59am

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nice.....

Mirch · September 19, 2011, 1:02pm

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Sannata jangal main nahi veerany main hota hay.
Jangal main raat din shor rahta hay.

Lihaza pahla shair

Naabigh · September 19, 2011, 3:30pm

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^^ I bet you haven't spend a night in jungle :)

Mirch · September 19, 2011, 3:46pm

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I lived in a home for 5 years where I had jungle in my backyard. And now I live where there are jungles all around my home.
So I know what I am talking about. Where there are trees there is life all around and that life is very vocal too. They do not stay quite for a fraction of a second.

Albatta veeranay main sannata hota hay.

Naabigh · September 19, 2011, 3:48pm

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and on the contrary - I have always had a quite night in a jungle ... :)

Na Adam na Adaam Zaad

wase apkay haN parindey bichary raat ko soTay nahi haiN ?

Mirch · September 19, 2011, 3:54pm

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agar paranday so jatatay hain toh jheengar aur dadoo boltay hain raat main , ullo aur chumgadary bhee raat hee ko boltay hain and there are many nocturnal animals in jungle which start making noise in the night.
I do not know which jungle you spent your night in , care to share ?

Naabigh · September 19, 2011, 4:00pm

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The riparian forests on the banks of indus and mangrove wetlands :)

khawabRung · September 19, 2011, 6:24pm

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Mirch, G pehli line par gor frmaiye agar bura na lagy to.

Basti mein hai wo sannata k jangal maat lagy..

Shair ji frma rahay hain k basti mai wo sanata hy k jungle mai b aisa sanata nehi hota.
Ap to kisi or side ko lay kr chal pady hain,
har insan ki apni soch hoti hy ap ki apni soch hy,

Mirch · September 19, 2011, 6:37pm

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basti main sannat ho sakta hay , veeranay main sannata ho sakta hay , magar jungle main sunnatay key mumkinity nahi lihaza shair ka mazmoon he ghalat hay.
Yeh abstract shairee toh hay nahi k jiss main sub kuch chalta hay .

Agar koi kahay k " zara see dair main yeh kia majra ho gaya
Anday pay hatee khara ho gaya

toh aap maan low gay/gee ?

khawabRung · September 19, 2011, 7:04pm

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Janab basti ki bat ho rehi hy verany ki nei, jaungle ko b wo sirf farz kar raha hy (for Example), or sath mai yeh b keh raha hy k jungle mai b kabi aisa sanata nei hota, jaisa aj basti mai hy,
meary khyal mai ab to ap ko samj a jani chahiye,
agar nehi aye to ap ki soi ataki hoi hy, agar phr b nehi, to ap ki soch mehdood hy,
he he he he,

Mirch · September 19, 2011, 7:08pm

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You broke my heart with your insulting remarks. You are on my ignore list from now on and I will not participate in any of your threads.

Anish kheial a khatir a ahbab cha’e’a her dum
thees na lag ja in abgeenoon ko.

khawabRung · September 19, 2011, 7:29pm

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Dear Mirch,,,
u say i insult u.
sorry, hath jod kar bcoz (mai nei chahta k kisi k dukh ki waja mai banu), but mai ny ap ko samjany ki koshish ki hy, likhny waly (shaair) ki soch hum sy 100 guna zayada hoti hy hum kbi b us ki soch ki gehrai tak nei phunch sakty,.
Agar ap kahain k phr b yeh galt hy to phr

Open chalange for U
ap is 1 shair ko

Basti mein hai wo sannata k jangal maat lagy..

Shaam dhaly bhi ghar pohanchon to aadhi raat lagy..

kisi baday say bady Shaair ko dikha dain or btain k yeh galt hy apni soch k mutabik agar wo keh day k yeh shair shaair ny galt likha hay

i leave this fourm

Naabigh · September 19, 2011, 7:34pm

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wayse appas ki baat hai - Shair waazaN or ikhlaq dono se gira hova hai :D

It should be

Bastii basti wo saNNata - veraNa bi maaT lagay
Sham dhlay jo ghar ko pohaNchooN , adhi raat lagay

Shair hum ne dusraT kardia - chahoo tu kisi bi ustad ko daika loo :D Now ... Ustad mirch Gs'abadi ki shaaN mein kuch gushTakhi na karna :D

khawabRung · September 19, 2011, 7:46pm

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Dear, Naabigh
ap nay un ko (Most Respectful Mirch) kitni dafa btany ki koshis ki. But unho ny to apni soi atkai hoi hy k galt hy. Shaair pagal nehi hoty jo shairi likhty hain. Apni bat kari ja rahy hain k galt hy banda kisi sy poch ly wazahat kar ly.
Yeh to Shaair ki insult kar rahy hain sher ko galt qarar dy kr.

muddii · September 20, 2011, 3:19am

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Nice:)

Mirch · September 20, 2011, 1:11pm

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:D

khawabRung · September 20, 2011, 4:12pm

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Akhlak say gira hova shkish kbi b Shaair nei bun sakta,
Bat hy sirf apni apni soch ki, or kuch nehi,