Yaar thanks a lot for the guidance. I really needed that lol. Thanks yea im not that used to of the urdu in roman. Actually i was not trying to rhyme khuda with dunia. The fact that i put “Se” end of both sentences made it sound pretty ok in my mind. Yea i need to practice more Rhyming in Urdu.
But i have been rhyming in english for a while now Il put up my New Song. Make sure u let me know what u think about it.